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Doll van de Doden Captain
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 Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 10:41 am
Just me posting my poems here. Feel free to leave comments on them if you want. Critique them as well I will respond back, even ask me questions about them if there is something you don't understand.
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 10:43 am
Traveler
Farewell brave traveler
Your nightmare has ended
The dream shall come
May you travel safe
The road goes on forever
Leave your burden behind
You lived but never loved
We feel your sorrow
To be slain with no honor
Your massacred body hanging alone
Hanging alone you were mourned
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Doll van de Doden Captain
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Doll van de Doden Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 10:46 am
Virus Called Humanity
From blood to skin
You live to die
Eat to kill
Work to destroy
Think to oppose
If I hurt you will you break
Will you fall
Half broken or not
Someone will save you
From I love you to I hate you
Hate with me
This is a virus
It grows and spreads
Not sure of life
You fall to pieces
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 11:04 am
I'm Through With You
Now I'm hating all that you are,
When you speak I just want you dead.
Every little thing I hear,
You say sets me off again.
Time and time again you are here,
To hurt my mind.
Swinging words and just killing,
Everything that I was.
Inside your laughing,
Outside you are killing me.
I scream one last time,
Only to be dead...
Again I remember what I hated,
It was you that caused me to be this way.
Standing with my last breathe,
I screamed at the top of my lungs,
"I HATE YOU!"
Slowly you fell to your knees.
Now crying and feeling everything,
I felt you are just as dead,
As I am now.
Realizing how unbearable it all is,
A tear rolled down from a devilish eye,
Onto the cold forsaken ground.
Feeling all the pain you ever caused,
Hurt more than the devil,
Stabbing your heart with his trident.
In life you suffered more,
While in death you found solice,
The next day.
As for I who took the pain,
That you had bestowed upon me,
Pain had damned me to a half-life.
Forever relying on the cursed bird,
Who was shunned from Olympia for a lie.
Crows are my only sanctuary on earth.
In death I sleep,
In life a crow shall my awakening.
Forever cursed I shall bless you,
With the silence of a damnation,
A whisper in the wind,
Is what I shall remain as.
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Doll van de Doden Captain
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Doll van de Doden Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 11:09 am
Angels
Angel of Death,
Take me to a place unknown.
I want to be set free,
Play your scythe,
And let me be set free.
The music is tainted;
Those who hear it are indebt,
To you for setting them free.
Angel of Life,
Stop cursing our souls,
With this world.
A freedom come to late.
Your music pure and alluring,
Temptation overwhelming us,
Those who listened are cursed,
By your cruelty.
Sing my Angels,
Bless us, Curse us.
Close your ears,
Turn from them.
They sing to cage and free you again.
We are trapped in this cage,
Then set free by the Angel of Death.
Stop your singing and listen,
To the truth.
Once set free you can dream,
Again you sleep forever.
But keep your soul hidden,
From the one who,
Shall send you to purgatory.
Angel above and Angel below,
Playing a game with our,
Lives forever?
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 11:09 am
Fun House
Look around in the fun house.
How many you’s there are?
10, 20, 30 each just watching you.
Eyes all on you and smiles greeting yours.
Wander in circles never leaving.
That’s right your trapped by yourself.
Wander around for awhile get lost.
Not like leaving is important.
So what if others come and go.
You are still trapped for now.
Waiting for that special person.
You know the one I’m talking about.
Yes the one who promised you.
They said they would take you away.
Well guess you got what you wanted.
No one will know what happened.
Even if your body is found inside.
That’s right you died by your own hand.
If anything you went crazy
Well that’s what they believe isn’t it.
Maybe it was the special someone.
Who you had just met a moment ago.
Or had you become desperate and wanting?
At any rate all those eyes and smiles are gone.
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Doll van de Doden Captain
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Doll van de Doden Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 11:10 am
Serenity
I am Love,
Give me your trust.
Give me your honor.
Give me your respect.
I am Hate
You’ll be damned under me.
You’ll be sent to hell for me.
You’ll be possessed by me.
I am Sorrow
Cry for me
Cry for your lover.
Cry with the world.
I am Happiness
Laugh with your friends.
Laugh everywhere but here.
Laugh alongside me forever.
I am Death
I’ll set you free.
I’ll send you home.
I’ll bless you forever.
I am Life
Entrust your soul to me.
Entrust me with your freedom.
Entrust everything to me.
I am Fate
Forever controlled you remain.
Forever intertwined in my ethereal web.
Forever mine you shall remain.
I am You
Decide once.
Decide never again.
Decide what cannot be decided ever.
I am Humanity
Lost in Love.
Lost in Hate.
Alone in Happiness.
Alone in Sorrow.
Within You.
Within Fate.
Trapped in Death.
Trapped in Life.
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 11:17 am
Dream Scape
Step by lonely step into the emptiness I crept.
Water carassed my flesh with it's cold tongues.
Though my eyes see nothing but the ordinary.
A tree, a car, a road, a town, something was wrong yet.
In the distance rests my old friend upon his lily.
Hastily I did step forth until he was in arms reach.
Suddenly an unknown needle pierced his thin skin with such ease it was painless.
Gazing as he flopped over and sunk to the crystal depths of water.
Looking left in a second a stray car hit me and split in twain.
Looking right quickly my eyes caught the leaves of Autumn ablaze.
Then a flash and a boom all was gone.
Week after week I did wait.
For the next dream to embrass me so to finish itself.
My mind torn and tattered awaited missing pieces.
Finally a new flash and boom all return.
Glancing down the endless road of my home town I saw everything was normal.
Walking along the road the water seemed to remain yet grow calmer.
Looking down a side road my eyes did see nothing but a vast ocean of crystal blue.
amongst those crystals did rest a fierce beast dubbed shark.
Then at last my mind was blank again left with nothing but darkness.
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Doll van de Doden Captain
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Doll van de Doden Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 11:18 am
Little bits and pieces of obscurity I did today during emphasis club. The words in all caps are the words I described in obscure ways. Basically we just took a word that anyone can understand and gave it an obscure image.
OLD - Describing old age in a person.
Dusty bones that crack in motion.
Mountain like ridges grow and fold.
Luster lost in the streams of grey.
Knowledge given to new winds.
GROWTH - Seeds and how they grow.
Moving and falling life's blood is spreading.
Leaching off something somehow.
They process and develope with each second.
GREEN and BROWN - Green is associated with life. Brown associated with mold that comes with death but is still living.
Engulfed in life but slowly fading,
This glorious site is held as healthy.
Emersed in rotting life a new age,
Brought forth by ugly smells.
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 11:21 am
Untitled
Forced down by your crimson sun
My eyes are burnt out of my skull
Because your vision was to much
In the end I was given up on
For a soul who fought you often
It hurt to speak with you
Everything hurt that you gave me
I accepted your kisses and warmth
Like I was a newborn being fed
Sadly though it ended all to early
When he apologized to you
It wasn’t anything more
Than him just wanting your body
Not what you were or had been
While now I understand
What he did want was you
Because he loved you and you loved him
Such a fool was I too think so poorly
Of a couple nearing one year
Now I understand
What you did to me and with me
Was nothing more than
An experiment for you
Something you wanted to do
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Doll van de Doden Captain
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Doll van de Doden Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 11:22 am
My Dear Sweet Rose
Your stone is heavier than the knife
I can't bear to live with it anymore
Look deep in the river blue for it
I promise to not push you in after
Though my promises aren't real
Love can't be forever dear lust
For sometimes even he get's bored
Then we are left torn and bleeding
Only then does your stone rise
From the deep blue river styx
Into the bussom of an angel
Where love shall blossom again
Bringing back the humanity lost
And casting Demons to his belly
This is how I fell for you
My dear sweet rose
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Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 5:46 am
I really ejoyed these poems Cath, they portray raw emotion and are very well written, capturing the reader's attenton quickly.
I especially enjoyed Traveler and Dream Scape, do keep it up 4laugh
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Polyphonic Rain Drops Vice Captain
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Doll van de Doden Captain
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 12:00 pm
Random stuff I had on my AIM buddy info for awhile.
It's in the blood
It's in the wine
It's in the flood
It's in the mind
I cast you away beast of light, off into the bowels of the sun.
Return to your home and spread hope and life there.
For here I only wish death, and the plague upon my sons.
Vile demon of the light I despise you yet you leave me not.
What do you seek?
What do you have to offer?
Perhaps the love, praise, and worship from my people?
Whatever you want you shall not touch, for it will burn.
You are far to bright, and hot for this dark and cold existence.
Now leave before I smite thee with the veil of shadows.
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Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 11:07 am
I wake up look out through the glass.
Instead of the world I see your face.
Looking into your eyes I see the fires burning.
Turning in them my bodies burning.
Ever turning I am screaming to stop it.
Not finished yet.
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Doll van de Doden Captain
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