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Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 7:41 pm
Valentine Greed
We wish, for the one We never receive The thing that we want The thing that we need
A person to hug A person to hold To keep with us, When the nights grow cold.
Since you have one A loving Valentine I’ll steal him from you And claim him. He is mine.
You know how I feel I stole him you. I’m going to dump him soon Take your man. He’s new.
Step into My Shoes
I’ve lost lots of friends And gained many too! I have emotions as well Step into my shoes!
Did you notice I cried? When you called me that name? Were not that different We’re basically the same
Did you see me get angry? When you made fun of my friend? Why won’t you stop? Why won’t this end?
Did you see me bring it? That gun to the class? You know what I’m gonna do? I’m going to kick your ***
Did you see me laugh? As I stepped away when you died People are screaming Now it’s you who will cry.
Can’t Hold on Anymore
I’m gonna o it Can’t hold on anymore No one will ever love me I hate life to its core
It’s easy enough to do. I can’t hold on anymore, Put the gun on my temple Let my body fall to the floor
I finally did I could’ve held on longer Why did I do it? I could’ve held on longer
Cookie Cutter Hands
I sit inside my room I’m sitting here to cry All the time I think Of all the ways to die
A bullet, to my head? A punch, to hit my brain? Its so hard to think. I know its all the same
People say I’m nice But I think of suicide Wishing I was dead Pushing tears aside.
I’m happy for the moment But that’s really all I need Getting rid of thoughts That were to be the deed
I’m enjoying life The pain has gone away I will never let My life get that astray
Dreaming
Dreaming for peace Dreaming for love Lifted out of bed To the Heavens Above
Dreaming of love Dreaming of Hate Walking near god To a pearly gate
Dreaming of light Dreaming of Dark I’m drinking in clouds And singing with a lark
Dreaming of the Day Dreaming of the Night Helping the helpless Fighting those who smite
Dreaming of the time On which I will awake Open my eyes to see The sunset as it breaks.
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 9:42 am
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 10:24 am
Awful examples of poetic meter, dull and childish subject matter, and poor rhyming.
I could actually picture Stephen Lynch singing them.
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