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 Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 3:38 pm
It's Wasa Dee, tryin' to get the rust off,
but he's shootin' blanks - it can't even blow some dust off.
I've been on hiatus too, but i'm still as sharp as ever,
you can't hope to beat me - I'm just too ********' clever.
We'd go blow for blow, but not for tooo long,
you rhyme like an asmatic, you can't even last a song.
For you a triumph is taking a huge bite of shlong,
and you like to read gay porno, even though you know it's wrong.
But I aint here to judge you, just to cut you a mouth into your throat,
leave you unable to sing but a single haggard note,
don't get discouraged, anyone who takes me on sits in this same boat,
'bout to get their stomache sliced into four, just like that of a goat.
You were good in your time, but like bledsoe your reign's at it's end,
see, you couldn't match me, not getting knocked out would be a godsend.
I've still got respect for you, and what you used to be,
but what you are now is nothing at all to me.
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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 1:09 pm
Alright listen kid, sit down and take some advice.
I may have lost some skills, but I’m still as smooth as black ice.
You wish you could be on the same level which I am.
But you’re just a little kid, so stop ******** tryin’
I’ve been gone so I can perfect another art form.
A graffiti artist slash rapper, while your a** is Lorne.
And I believe I watch straight porn.
After this battle my title will be reborn.
So ******** you, I don’t play around with toys.
You say I watch gay porno, while you play with little boys.
Like you they have false hopes on life’s joys.
Wasa Dee is back, and I’m ready to make some noise.
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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 5:17 pm
Avoid repetition in different verses. Feel free to change style, vocabulary, basically your entire approach to every verse, atleast in battles, should be generally different.
Punchlines are always a good touch, but can easily be overshadowed by a skillful use of wordplay. You'll also want to provide a certain level of repetition throughout, let your personal style become known, admired, even utilized.
Don't limit yourself too easily. Always find inspiration for lines for many different sources. Exploit personal character defects and knowledge you have on your opponent, you'll find that broad insults won't have the same affect as hitting someone to the heart, however..know where the line is drawn. For example..talking about a *****'s fiancee will get you raped up the butt. Look at Zone! rofl
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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 5:25 pm
Wasa you couldn't have fallen off that much talk2hand
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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 7:28 pm
Honestly I didn't. I just need to get the old juices flowing.
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Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 6:42 am
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I had a bad feeling about brining gay insults into it... they're just so... generic.
Any thoughts for me??
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 10:46 pm
Wasa...The ******** was that? You beleive you watch straight porn? ***** you not sure?
All in all, as usuall SJC is much more complex than his opponent, so he's getting the vote
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 8:58 am
jceaz Wasa...The ******** was that? You beleive you watch straight porn? ***** you not sure? All in all, as usuall SJC is much more complex than his opponent, so he's getting the vote I believe this was stated before, but I'll say it again for your handi-caped a**. Mock Battle, and no one cares about your vote d**k face. talk2hand
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