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 Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 1:45 pm
so if u read it give me some advice on a name plz
I feel dead.I feel mad.I
feel depressed.I feel like my life has come to an end.
I feel like I want to hurt er kill someone.I feel heart broken.
I see black.I see death.
I see hatred.I see pain.
Nobody is as depressed as i feel.
Nobody is as mad as I feel.
Nobody is as dead as I feel.
Nobody is as lifeless as I feel.
Nobody has ever hurt or killed someone as much as I want to.
Nobody is as heart broken as I feel.
Nobody see's as much black as I see.
Nobody see's as much death as I see.
Nobody see's as much hatred as I see.
Nobody see's or feels as much pain as I do.
Edit:These are 2 different poems
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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 2:54 pm
O.o are they two diffrent poems...
if they are then the first could be "i feel"
and the second.."nobody"
but if they are the same..well that would be kinda hard cause you changed the structure of the poem by going from feel..or nobody...O.o i think..
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