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Shoulders are too broad(she looks like a man), boobs are too high(they shouldn't be that defines and they shouldn't defy gravity), and you need to learn a sense of balance. Right now she's floating in midair. Nobody can stand like that.

Other than that, you've improves on the head and hips, yayness. I like all your folds except the ones on the pants, which as someone mentioned early, do kind of look like DBZ folds. But aside from that, they don't seem to have anything to do with how the fabric is actually folding.

Try tucking in some pants real tight yourself, or look at cosplayers who cosplay people with pants tucked in like that and imitate how those fold.