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princess of Apathy

PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 8:30 pm


Ok...so if you want to, you can put poetry in here...no rude comments about others...this is a fun place to post and look at poetry...

I'll start off:
brother
he sits there taking all the sh*t his brother gives him,
as the hatrid builds up in the room,
his brother hits him,
he just sits there and trys to be strong,
he wishes there was a way out,
he so despritaly wants to be free,
as it is pounded into his head that he deserves it,
until he belives it is true

she trys to tell him,
that he is a great pearson,
he dosen't listen to her,
he lets the posin his brother put in his mind set in,
as she trys to give him the antidote,
it is too late for him,
the posin is in his blood,
with his last breath he tells her he'll never forget her,
and as ha dies so dose her soul

she walks around soul-less for a while,
morning his death,
but she couldn't take it anymore,
she writes a short note to her parents,
then takes her beloved dagger from her bedside table,
and plunges it deep into her chest,
with her remaning breath,
she tells of her passionate love for him,
as the crimson blood drips onto her silk sheets,
she wispers his name,
and today they lie,
in there graves
PostPosted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 5:14 pm


Aww...That's a really sad. It's written very well, though. Good job on it. ^^

I write poetry all of the time. It's fun and relaxing all at the same time.

perfectangelprincess


princess of Apathy

PostPosted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 10:19 am


oh..thanks...i'm glad you like it, if you want you can post some of your poetry here, i love seeing other pepoles poems.
PostPosted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 6:06 pm


Sure, I'll post one of my poems tomorrow. ^^

I still have some homework to work on right now. sweatdrop

perfectangelprincess


Lily-Anne-Marie

PostPosted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 11:10 am


It's good, reminds me much of the tragedy between Romeo and Juliet, only a little bit more modernized.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 9:46 pm


I wrote this last summer...

When I met you there was a song
That chased me round all summer long
The song was sweet and also strong
But was its aim so vast

I once told you of a dream
A dream that held a pretty theme
They held us in such high esteem
But did I think too fast

Those days and nights were cool as rain
They washed away my every pain
They eased my fears and calmed my brain
But has that time gone past

A sunset sitting in a chair
I didn’t think we’d ever care
They’d hang forever in the air
But was I wrong at last

The year drew in, the autumn’s leaves
Blew softly down from all the trees
And you came down with your disease
But was I in the cast

I left a note where you might see
And know my tongue I won’t let free
So read my mind and you’ll know me
But is there such contrast

The brushstrokes on the faded wall
They stand almost a mile tall
The wilted hand tht paints them all
Shall tell us why at last

Velisarios


perfectangelprincess

PostPosted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 6:15 pm


Velisarios
I wrote this last summer...

When I met you there was a song
That chased me round all summer long
The song was sweet and also strong
But was its aim so vast

I once told you of a dream
A dream that held a pretty theme
They held us in such high esteem
But did I think too fast

Those days and nights were cool as rain
They washed away my every pain
They eased my fears and calmed my brain
But has that time gone past

A sunset sitting in a chair
I didn’t think we’d ever care
They’d hang forever in the air
But was I wrong at last

The year drew in, the autumn’s leaves
Blew softly down from all the trees
And you came down with your disease
But was I in the cast

I left a note where you might see
And know my tongue I won’t let free
So read my mind and you’ll know me
But is there such contrast

The brushstrokes on the faded wall
They stand almost a mile tall
The wilted hand tht paints them all
Shall tell us why at last


Wow! Lovely poem!

It's really well written. ^_^
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