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 Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 7:37 pm
Here He stands
Here stands a boy
Feeling like a used toy
Never knowing he was loved so much
Making people happy just by his touch
Here stands a lonesome man
Lost in a deserted land
Feeling unloved and alone
His heart as cold as his tone
Here stands a confused soul
Life already taken its toll
Never knowing how to feel
Believing his fate had already a seal
Here stands a lost being
Love he wasn’t seeing
Thinking not a soul heard his cries
As he said his mournful goodbyes
Here he stands in oblivion
Knowing everywhere he as been
Thinking he knew his life was useless
But not knowing we all wanted him to have peacefulness
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 7:18 pm
i like it its very deep........
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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 2:51 pm
^^i really like it..although the last line doesn't seem to fit...
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