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 Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 6:13 pm
Hello everyone in the guild just had one of those pop-out of no where ideas. So here is the idea this is just for fun (and a way to help with my grammar and story telling). Anyways I wanted to try a story roleplay; the idea is that i'll start off and you all if you want that is to continue it in a way. The rule is that the person who will reply next has to continue it like a story or novel in his or her way. Introduce any character develop the plot and such...I hope I'm clear on this. In any case lets start! Oh yeah if by chance can anyone be a teacher for me on grammar and help increase my vocabulary I know i'm in the 11th grade, but i'm kind of sick having the education level of a 5th grader... sadly. Ok then if anyone care to be my grammar and vocab teacher please pm me thank you very much for the help.
Well let us begin shall we. 3nodding
Calm oceans swaying back and forth as the moon beams bright light beyond the gradual moving clouds, "Oi! Captain Kyte the water seems very calm." Says a man in the crows nest looking in the horizions of the ocean. Kyte at the age of 19, cloth in a blue vest with a under white shirt, a head banadana with a cresent moon design on it, as he walks about on the deck of the ship looking around at his crew. This would be the crew and captain of the blue ocean pirates. As the boat went forth across the deep ocean glimming with the reflection of the distanced stars above, a fierce storm was forming and appoarching.
(and this is why I need help with grammar... sweatdrop )
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 12:08 pm
I'll be a teacher if you read my story and post some feedback on what you think... blaugh
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 12:11 pm
linktimelord The calm oceans sway back and forth as the moon beams bright light beyond the gradual moving clouds. "Oi! Captain Kyte! The water seems very calm!" yells a man in the crows nest looking in the horizions of the ocean. Kyte at the age of 19, cloth in a blue vest with a under white shirt, a head banadana with a cresent moon design on it, walks about on the deck of the ship looking around at his crew. This would be the crew and captain know as the Blue Ocean Pirates. As the boat went forth across the deep ocean glimming with the reflection of the distanced stars above, a fierce storm was forming and appoarching.
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 12:12 pm
You need to make sure if you read it it understands and is all in one TENSE.
edit: tense
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 2:55 pm
Yay thanks and sure i'll read your story don't know if I can give much feed back, but ok 3nodding and the tense thing yeah I don't know most of that stuff usually i'm brain dead on grammar ... sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 4:03 pm
I'll add to the story now I guess...
From the east came a cry of horror...
"There's going to be a wreck. And my brother's on board!" screams Joseph in his head. "Why don't my visions ever come at the right time?"
A second cry comes to Joseph's ears, this time from the ports. "They're leaving already? Oh I've got to get down there!" Joseph runs down the stairs and grabs his cloak before heading into the dusty streets...
Wow, I'm a natural
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