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Yup. It's pretty good.
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 2:21 pm


Yup. A sketch of Mana, not done yet, but still. How am I doing?
Done in pencils. Turned blue when I scanned it. xD

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 6:41 pm


Your linework and your values are done very well. The only thing I can really see right now is I think the ear needs more detail.

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 9:23 am


ekirei
Your linework and your values are done very well. The only thing I can really see right now is I think the ear needs more detail.
Well, that's how it is in the picture I used, the lighting is so bright that you can't see any details in the ear.
PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 2:36 pm


I quite like how the hair is looking so far. The waves look gooood. :3

Something is kinda bothering me about his hand... maybe shading the fingers a bit darker would help. Not sure.

The way the nose is now looks like it's a lot pointer and longer than I assume it actually is. I think the placement of the left (our left) nostril looks too far down... and the shading (or lack thereof) makes me think the nose is a lot bigger than it actually is.

Other than that, looking great so far. ^_^

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 3:51 pm


Tawney
I quite like how the hair is looking so far. The waves look gooood. :3

Something is kinda bothering me about his hand... maybe shading the fingers a bit darker would help. Not sure.

The way the nose is now looks like it's a lot pointer and longer than I assume it actually is. I think the placement of the left (our left) nostril looks too far down... and the shading (or lack thereof) makes me think the nose is a lot bigger than it actually is.

Other than that, looking great so far. ^_^
Well, from the picture I had, the shading (even though his face is practically white) it suggests that he has a a pointy nose with a little bit of a lump on the bridge. (A nose job, perhaps?) And I looked at some other pictures of him, and from the front it looks like a genuine Asian nose, but, from the side, it's actually quite pointy. And I agree about the fingers, in the picture they were practically black.
PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 4:09 pm


[nami swim]
Tawney
I quite like how the hair is looking so far. The waves look gooood. :3

Something is kinda bothering me about his hand... maybe shading the fingers a bit darker would help. Not sure.

The way the nose is now looks like it's a lot pointer and longer than I assume it actually is. I think the placement of the left (our left) nostril looks too far down... and the shading (or lack thereof) makes me think the nose is a lot bigger than it actually is.

Other than that, looking great so far. ^_^
Well, from the picture I had, the shading (even though his face is practically white) it suggests that he has a a pointy nose with a little bit of a lump on the bridge. (A nose job, perhaps?) And I looked at some other pictures of him, and from the front it looks like a genuine Asian nose, but, from the side, it's actually quite pointy. And I agree about the fingers, in the picture they were practically black.


Ah, well I suppose it would help if we could see the reference pic. Unless it's not online. :s

Tawney


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PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:56 pm


Tawney
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Tawney
I quite like how the hair is looking so far. The waves look gooood. :3

Something is kinda bothering me about his hand... maybe shading the fingers a bit darker would help. Not sure.

The way the nose is now looks like it's a lot pointer and longer than I assume it actually is. I think the placement of the left (our left) nostril looks too far down... and the shading (or lack thereof) makes me think the nose is a lot bigger than it actually is.

Other than that, looking great so far. ^_^
Well, from the picture I had, the shading (even though his face is practically white) it suggests that he has a a pointy nose with a little bit of a lump on the bridge. (A nose job, perhaps?) And I looked at some other pictures of him, and from the front it looks like a genuine Asian nose, but, from the side, it's actually quite pointy. And I agree about the fingers, in the picture they were practically black.


Ah, well I suppose it would help if we could see the reference pic. Unless it's not online. :s
It didn't come from the internet, I'm afraid, I got it at Anime Expo. ^^;;;;
But it might be on the powerful internet...
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