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 Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 5:58 pm
I'm in your arms as you wisper
Sweet nothings in my ear.
I look into your eyes and they say
I love you forever.
You tell me you won't leave me and
You tell me that I'm the one for you.
You and me e have loves enduring promise.
Just hold me in your arms forever.
Never let me go
Cuase tomarrow may never come.
Just kiss me and hold me for ever in thy arms.
Cause we have loves promise.
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Posted: Mon Apr 30, 2007 8:18 pm
It's good, but the 'thy' threw me. The poem used your every other time.
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 2:22 pm
Yeah sometimes when I write I let my finger just wonder over the keyboard......
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