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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2004 9:48 am
I'm feel like I'm going to be using this guild a lot, and I declare this thread my place of refuge.
Services provide by Delfire's Writing Workshop:
Delfire's works - Anytime I feel like writing something, or sharing something, no matter what time of day, no matter what subject matter or relevance or continuity, I will post it here for the public to view. Feel free to give comments or criticism. Tell me my work sucks, but only, and only on the condition that you tell me why and how.
Biased Reviews - If you have something you want a review, opinion on, or just feel like posting something to stroke your ego, post it here with the a request for a biased review and I'll be sure to look it over and give due Southern hospitality. As a warning, don't be offended if I don't like your work. I have a limited number of things I can like, and your work may not be one of them. Thanks for understanding.
Devil's Advocate - This is just like a biased review, but with a twist. I'll go out of my way to tell you just how much your writing sucks, and will attack both content and mechanics. This is not for the light hearted. The reason why I'm providing this service is because sometimes as people we get wrapped up with how cool something is. Allow me to see the bad side of your writing for you. For the serious writer only, I'm not responsible if you hate me.
Advice and Advisement - If you're seeking advice, writing related or otherwise, feel free to ask at any time. I'm a 19 year old single male with a passion for writing and things 19 year old males like, and may just have the advice you're looking for. I'm no sage, but at the least consider that I have one thing that you don't have: a different point of view.
Character Creation/Developement - Need help creating a character that doesn't suck? You've come to the right place. I'm an avid fan of comic books and anime, have been so for years, and have seen half of every trick in the book, so naturally I'll have something to say about the next megabeast of character you're planning on unleashing into the world. If I like your character enough, who knows, maybe I'll even help you develop them over time.
Originality Well - We all hit our dry spots from time to time. I've yet to hit mine, so if you need some water from my well, feel free to draw a cup from mine, so to speak. I'm constantly generating new ideas in my sloggin of a noggin, and can throw you a bone when you're hungry. Note that I only throw bones, there's no way I'm going to write up an entire story for you the same why I wrote up Predz's English paper like I did a couple of weeks ago. The only way he gets away with that s**t is because he's a personal friend of mine. The grimlock is coming. Hide your Samantha.
In case you can't tell by there being less than one page in this thread, this all is under construction, and subject to verification. All the same, get those requests in! I'll start complaining when there's more requests than I'd like to deal with at once. xp
Here's some guidelines, to be added to as the need arises:
If you're asking for any sort of assistance, keep your work to one post, and keep your post to a readable chunk, or no more than three paragraphs. If I can't read it, then I won't read it.
Special thanks to the Cranky Writer's Guild for accepting me, I won't let you down.
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Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 5:32 am
He sat in his cradle, waiting. That formless creature of sin and solitude whose purpose still remained unclear. What role would his master have him play? Would he see his master again? And how long would his waiting last?
"I have named him Will."
The shadows spoke again.
"Will?" "Yes. With such infinite ability, he is more than to be considered a simple machination. He is a beginning and an ending. Created by my design, Will has no purpose but to find his purpose. Blindness seeking light."
"..."
"...And when Will finds that light,--" "There's an intruder."
In the presence of light, even shadows disappear, and yet Will's purpose remains unclear.
For one who sits in the cradle, and lives no life, for one who sits in the cradle, there is no strife.
If you live your life to only reap what you sow, the seeds of others may never grow.
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