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 Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 5:31 pm
I'm very pleased about this story, just one little thingy that I have just noticed that is bugging me a bit. I never got to 10 pages.... oh well I hopefully will next story.
EDIT!: OMG! 10 PAGES! IRONY!
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 5:45 pm
w00t! see, u got to the 10 pages! shoot for 20 next time!!! (but noe pressure xd )
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 11:51 am
eek 20 pages? I doubt my next story could get that long.... Almost done the prologue though.
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 11:55 am
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 5:55 pm
Okay now that this story is over I have to ask:
What Made You Keep Reading? What Was Your Favourite Part? Any Suggestions On How I Could Of Made It Better?
Personally, my favourite part was the end.
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 6:00 pm
i loved the suspense, how you're always wondering how the story is going to end, what's going to happen next.
...yeah.
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Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 1:34 pm
i kinda liked the way they kept ending up in the hospital 4laugh
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Posted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 4:40 pm
That was a sad ending. I think ima go sulk in a corner now. emo
I liked not knowing who she would be with and not knowing how things would happen next.
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