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(Red_Paint)

PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 4:15 pm


arrow Just tell me if you don't get the theme
of this poem... a lot of people didn't
sweatdrop


On her new wings
She loves to fly
A symbol of freedom
To cover up lies


She had a rough life
Her mom, never around
Her loving dad,
Never found


She felt she was done
Not able to bare it all
She went to the top
Careful not to fall


She made her decision
Though not very wise
She jumped off the bridge
And let her hopes rise


She knew she was free
Able to get her wings
But she doubts every day
Thinking ‘why did I lose those things?’


She knew it was rough
But she lost her life
What happened after
When she saw the white


She received her wings
Able to stand tall
Filled with pride
Not doubting it all


Now not many people believe
In an angels story anymore
For people have no freedom
They just lock the door


Closing yourself out
Not having the chance to be free
Not living your life
Closing out what you see


Just stop to believe
Just believe once more
Give her your ears
And open that door


But for what its worth
I know I still have trust
That girl flying free
Showing we must


We must stay strong
Even when times are tough
When things go down
And you feel you had enough


Though she has her freedom
Nothing’s the same
She died that day
And she lost her game


But just remember that angel
Who loves to fly free
Just remember the angel
Who looks like me


(Red_Paint)
PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 7:36 pm


I really liked this poem. I think many people do close themselves off.

Malicoy


Tarantellatears

PostPosted: Mon Jan 22, 2007 2:43 pm


wow, this is amazing...the theme's kinda sad though...but nothing's wrong with that.
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