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 Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 9:09 pm
Its not just a crush,
i think im in love.
its not just a crush,
i know i'm in love.
my heart is aching,
i cant think straight.
no matter where i look,
i always see your face.
i can only hear your laugh,
and nothing but your voice.
will i ultimatly go mad,
will my heart make the right choice?
i'm not sure i like this,
my stomache in knots.
my head is always hurting,
always so much pain.
you can't eat,
you can barely sleep.
breathing is hard,
and your body aches.
you feel like your dying,
all because of him.
you want to hate him,
resent him!
but your heart won't let you,
it'll just hurt more.
its a no-win situation,
love him, with pain.
or just stop loving him,
undoable/unthinkable/unbearable
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Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 9:26 pm
Unrequited love. You captured it quite nicely. It's short and simple, yet it gets right to the heart of the matter.
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 1:31 pm
hey i dont want to be rude but i want to give you a tip when you are writing dont go from i to you it is confusing i am guessing you wrote it a to diffrent times but i think it was really good keep writing.
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