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How I See Me - [poem]

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kykana

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 11:46 am


I also have this on my FictionPress account but no one has commented on it ...
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How I See Me

How do you see me?

I wonder and ask

But you just answer back

"How do you see your self"

But I don't

I don't see myself

I can't for the tears blind me

My soul has split in two

I fighter who is willing to kill to protect herself

& she puts herself down day after day

A person who hates herself and wishes to die

Some days

The other is sad

She doesn't know what to think

She thinks what ever she does she offends people

And the fighter feeds on this by putting her down more
PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 7:49 pm


That's realy good. It makes you think. Keep up the good work. ^__^

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 7:48 am


Corpse_Bride_131
That's realy good. It makes you think. Keep up the good work. ^__^

Thanks.
The comments not up anymore, but on FictionPress someone pointed out how one line contradicts another.
It got deleted though on accident ( >_< )
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