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astro zombie muffin

PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 11:42 pm


Rainbows Electrified

The space between us was electrified,
or so it seemed at the time.
The messy fusion of the thoughts
running through my mind confused
and frustrated me with their
revolution and rebellion.

Our lives are wracked
With controversy
and reckless behavior,
sought understanding,
and close-mindedness.
The lack of morals is
Devastatingly distracting
and frightening.

The exalted social royalty jump
at you, like dogs in store windows,
shouting, "love me, choose me,
pick me, want me."

The loving hate and hateful love,
surrounding their lives
chokes and smothers them,
until there is nothing left
of the social royalty
they knew as teenagers.



Note:
There isn't really a rhyme scheme, so don't bug me with comments telling me that. The stanza organization is kind of free-verse, but each stanza has an even number of lines.
So there you go!
Enjoy!
PostPosted: Mon Jan 15, 2007 4:56 pm


i especially like how you made some words bold. keep it as it is.

Elizabeth the first


astro zombie muffin

PostPosted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 10:21 pm


Bump.
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