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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 1:36 pm
Hey, I'm hoping to eventually be a journalist. But right now, i'm just a struggling poet/short story writer. Tell me what ya think? Its about my brother, he just passed away about a year ago now...
The excitement, the fun the hurt, and the love. We've been here for it all now, haven't we?
No matter what I was always here right next to you and now, I don't know what to do.
Therr is no fun, no excitement, but there is love, and the hurt never disappears.
What am I going to do? I have no one to turn to. No one to share my secrets, no one to hold me close. No one to say they love me, when I need it the most.
I want you back, forever. I wish you were still here. I'd hold you close, and say i love you. Not just let you disappear.
Its my fault your gone now isn't it? This is my punishment. I never should have lied to you. I could have said more "I love you's" and never made you cry.
But all your pain is over now. You've left us all for good. No matter what I'll always love. That, i'll never let go of.
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Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2007 11:00 am
*hugs* i am sorry about your brother. your poem is awesome hun! i give it a 10/10
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Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 1:28 pm
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