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Nami Tsuki

PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 10:15 pm


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this took about... an hour i think on shi-painter.

do i have skills or does this suck?
PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 12:46 pm


You definitely have some skillz, so that's nothing to worry about. I like your colour choices. smile

I think the scribbly-ness could be toned down a bit. I think it'd look best if either:
- you toned down the scribbly lineart to better match your colouring style
- you scribbled-up the colouring to better match the lineart

rofl

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Leadfooted Phantom

PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 3:49 pm


Cute! You've got skills, and it's good to experiment. Though for working with solids, I'd suggest Paint BBS if it's available because of the masking tool options, though you can make either work. Might want to keep the layout/background consistent with the rest of things rather than a kind of blocky solidy outline.

That hat is so cute, and so is the girl herself. I took a look at your profile, and you've got some really nice smooth solid work too. Keep it up!
PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 7:10 pm


thankies! xd

it'd be less scribbly if my mouse would cooperate.

wish i had a tablet. then i'd be rich off of selling awesome avi art heart

but sadly i am poor and have only a ball and mouse. *sigh*

oh well. i tried.

Nami Tsuki


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PostPosted: Sat Jan 13, 2007 2:15 pm


Aww. D:
If you reallyreallyreally want one, you could try asking your parents about selling some of your older clothes to thrift stores if they're in good shape. Or, try and make some sort of compromise, a kind of 'I'll pay half if I could please get it for (enter major holiday here)' thing.
Or say it'd be easier on your wrist than a mouse would. ;]


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Sweet! Skills aplenty, no worries there.
I think that the eyes in particular look rather nice. ^^ Maybe try it with that style of scribbles next time? A little more compact, a little fewer stray lines.
Or, draw all the lines in the style you drew that hat in. (Which is a little looser and more uniform in which direction the lines are going.)
Looks pretty cool as-is, though. <33
PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 3:17 pm


I like that instead of looking like you are trying to hide the scribly lines you make them a part of your style and simply add more. It looks really cool, I like it alot biggrin

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