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 Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 5:13 pm
As there are 100 themes, I decided to make a thread just for mine. Now I will start. I'm doing haiku's becuase haiku's are what I need to work on the most.
1. Introduction
My introduction follows
My idea to write
My idea to surpass you
2. Love
Love is temper as
Hate is a rush that will not
Be calmed by water
3. Light
Light will come sooner
Then my tears will dry and
too late for redemption
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 5:14 pm
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 5:18 pm
Wow, as it horrible. Or wow as in really good?
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 5:36 pm
Well, first of all, haiku=
5
7
5
Second, harsh.
And as to the new themes...
They're pretty. ^^
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 5:38 pm
KirbyVictorious Well, first of all, haiku= 5 7 5 Second, harsh. And as to the new themes... They're pretty. ^^ Thats all I could think of for an intro. But thank you.
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 5:52 pm
These are really good.
Haiku has never been my strong suit.
Though please give me a message so I can make you a little personal project update at the end of the main list. 3nodding
And if you dont mind I need to move this into the WIP Forum.
Since the 100 themes has been assigned into the subforum.
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