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 Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2007 2:59 pm
Yes. It's anime-tastic. ><
Some Oekaki commissions+drawing. I know that the art is horrendously anime-y, which may make some eyeballs sizzle and burn, and that the poses aren't quite original, not to mention the fact that they're all facing the same way XD Still, comments, crits would be appreciated. Particularly if there's some sort of recurring abnormality in my pics... Most of my Gaia commish stuff will probably be similar to the things you see here, so if I keep screwing up on something, it'd be nice if I could fix that.
k i'm STFUnow.
 
This one is special, and is totally valid grounds on which Dr. V can pretty much stone me for. But in my defense, the commissioner requested that I make her giant-boobied. D:
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Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2007 6:43 pm
Do you draw a lot of yaoi?
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Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2007 7:36 pm
XDDD No.. But I read enough of it.
Would I be slow to just realize that you've been modded?
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Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2007 8:53 pm
That Pretty Gay One XDDD No.. But I read enough of it.
Would I be slow to just realize that you've been modded? It happened pretty recently, so no. And I ask because they have very yaoi bodies.
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Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 5:25 am
I really like your art, and I like your shading to, they are all great pictures, though, All of the art I'm seeing here is very one-sided, if you get what I'm saying. I'm getting the impression that drawing faces that are facing the right side is your weak point, so take a few minutes every day to practice drawing in the other direction.
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Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 1:26 pm
Stravi is King I really like your art, and I like your shading to, they are all great pictures, though, All of the art I'm seeing here is very one-sided, if you get what I'm saying. I'm getting the impression that drawing faces that are facing the right side is your weak point, so take a few minutes every day to practice drawing in the other direction. I have that problem. gonk
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Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 2:43 pm
Image -> Rotate Canvas -> Flip Canvas Horizontal.
razz
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Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 11:14 pm
i think my only comment is the disclaimer you put for these. i mean, yeah they're bright and anime but i can still see quality work...and it's a little off-putting to see someone just brush it off because it's not someone else's cup of tea.
personally i like the colors, very whimsical...the same goes with your lines. normally i'm not into aliased lines, but the way you use it works in your favor. the hips look a little weird to me in the third one, the left hip looks a bit flat. the last one is my favorite, the boobs don't look all that big to me and the proportions look pretty good. i like the creative way you cropped off the bottom, nice play on positive and negative shapes. i'm not too fond of the hair lines going over the eyes, makes that area look a little cluttered. i guess my only crit for the last one is maybe putting a little bit of reflected light from the pixie on her.
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Dr. Valentine Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 9:25 am
Oh no, I found your thread domokun
Alright, the neckwise anatomy in #3 is weird... #3 specifically looks like the face is screwed on wrong, like the angle doesn't match the head or something.
Not a big deal but the angel wing in #2 looks kinda random and raggedy, whereas a real feathered wing has patterns to it.
I actually like #1 (le gasp), it's simple, but it has some character to it. There is texture to the shading and the color is well balanced.
I really hate the eyes but I'm sure you expect that so moving right along - I like the way you have done the mouths. The little details like the dimples at the corners and the angles you use are distinct and very cute.
I like that you throw neat little design elements into your images, they don't all work for me but it definately lends them a 'finished' look.
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 2:14 pm
Oh... Wow. I didn't notice the flaws in #3 until you pointed them out. You win several internets. D:
So... How would I fix that? The look I was trying to get in that picture was kind of like... Head slightly tilted down and looking kind of upwards. I'm guessing that the neck has to tilt backwards sort of... I kind of noticed that during some practice that I did after that pic.
Kthnx for all the help. You people win. <3
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Dr. Valentine Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 6:33 am
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