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 Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 2:32 pm
I absolutely adored how my friends avi looked with the new items on, so I drew it for her. XD And I'm really really happy with the turnout. I did the original sketch in pencil, then scanned it and went over the lines in Corel Painter 2.0, and then coloured it with Adobe Photoshop Elements 3.0 probably took me two hours  This isn't the full size (photobucket downsized it XD) It's actually like... huge. XD I might upload it to Sheezyart and link that here for the full size. EDIT: Here it is! http://www.sheezyart.com/view/1026549/C&C (be nice about it, though.)
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Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 4:15 pm
This is really cute. ^^
A couple of things that I've noticed is that her breasts seem to be set in a way that suggest that she's turned more towards us than her shoulders imply, and that her right hand is a little awkwardly drawn. I think if you made her index finger start a little farther down, it'd even out a bit.
You did a lovely job with the vines! The more I looked, the more I liked them. I also really enjoy how her left hand is positioned. It's very cute. :]
Over all a very swell picture.
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Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 5:31 pm
Sign-up Free This is really cute. ^^
A couple of things that I've noticed is that her breasts seem to be set in a way that suggest that she's turned more towards us than her shoulders imply, and that her right hand is a little awkwardly drawn. I think if you made her index finger start a little farther down, it'd even out a bit.
You did a lovely job with the vines! The more I looked, the more I liked them. I also really enjoy how her left hand is positioned. It's very cute. :]
Over all a very swell picture. people keep mentioning the breasts. Could you perhaps do a drawover of how I could fix it? I'd appreciate it, because as is, I don't quite understand what you mean... sweatdrop Ah, so you mean /our/ right, her left. Got it -was confused- biggrin Yeah, I just messed up on her index finger and was... too lazy to fix it. XD Thanks! I was going to make them more complicated, but I decided against it, I thought the simpler way would look better. :3 Thanks again!
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Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 6:31 pm
Well I gave it a try, but I rather suck at draw-overs so it got recycled.
I'll write it out instead:
The right (our right) breast needs to hang lower, to start with. Just shift it down a handful of pixels. 3nodding Also, what I mean about her breasts/shoulders not matching is that the way she's standing, her breasts should naturally be falling a little lower and more spread out than they are, so less of her side would be seen past them. ^^
So those curving outer-lines of her breasts should start about level with her armpit, and her nipples (if you could see them) about.. a head's length below her chin.
It'd show a couple of pictures, but they're.. naked, and I don't know how many people'd be okay with seeing them. However, corbis.com is a great site if you're ever unsure about something, anatomy-wise. It's all stock photography, so there's a lot of high-quality photos. Just type in the body-part and a bunch of stuff should pop up.
I hope that made sense, but I definitely wouldn't blame you if it didn't. xd
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Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 7:16 pm
Sign-up Free Well I gave it a try, but I rather suck at draw-overs so it got recycled.
I'll write it out instead:
The right (our right) breast needs to hang lower, to start with. Just shift it down a handful of pixels. 3nodding Also, what I mean about her breasts/shoulders not matching is that the way she's standing, her breasts should naturally be falling a little lower and more spread out than they are, so less of her side would be seen past them. ^^
So those curving outer-lines of her breasts should start about level with her armpit, and her nipples (if you could see them) about.. a head's length below her chin.
It'd show a couple of pictures, but they're.. naked, and I don't know how many people'd be okay with seeing them. However, corbis.com is a great site if you're ever unsure about something, anatomy-wise. It's all stock photography, so there's a lot of high-quality photos. Just type in the body-part and a bunch of stuff should pop up.
I hope that made sense, but I definitely wouldn't blame you if it didn't. xd I think I got what your getting at but considering how her shoulders are tilted up, wouldn't that make her breasts tilt in the same manner? Thanks!
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Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 8:39 pm
Sign-up Free: Like so?  I hope that was what you were seeing wrong with the breasts...
One other point: is it just me, or is the torso oddly long? I think the natural waistline should be higher, or the head bigger and lower body longer. Could be the placement of the breasts that's making it look funny, but... (I suck with words, sorry.)
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Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 9:12 pm
sybex, you're my hero. That's exactly it. ^^
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 1:24 pm
sybex Shark Sign-up Free: Like so? I hope that was what you were seeing wrong with the breasts...
One other point: is it just me, or is the torso oddly long? I think the natural waistline should be higher, or the head bigger and lower body longer. Could be the placement of the breasts that's making it look funny, but... (I suck with words, sorry.) I think I get what your saying... but for some reason how that's done doesn't seem right to me. It might just be me but how you've done it makes her torso seem oddly short to me. I could be wrong though. Thanks. biggrin
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 5:17 pm
[Unseen] sybex Shark Sign-up Free: Like so? I hope that was what you were seeing wrong with the breasts...
One other point: is it just me, or is the torso oddly long? I think the natural waistline should be higher, or the head bigger and lower body longer. Could be the placement of the breasts that's making it look funny, but... (I suck with words, sorry.) I think I get what your saying... but for some reason how that's done doesn't seem right to me. It might just be me but how you've done it makes her torso seem oddly short to me. I could be wrong though. Thanks. biggrin
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