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 Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2006 6:29 pm
Yes, well quickie of someone with a Basketball, and it doesn't look quite right to me, especially the pants.. Anyways, Luffs C&C, and drawovers are X3 
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Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2006 7:31 pm
^^
I think if you made her head a little more narrow, and re-positioned her legs, it'd get rid of some of that oddness. As they are right now, they're a bit off-center. Just shift the right leg towards the left a little.
Part of the reason the legs look a bit wonky is because of some of the folds, I think it makes her knees look a little farther down than they otherwise would be.
On the "Whoa, cool!" side, though, I you did a really nice job on the face. Lovely eyes, bright smile. She's really pretty. I quite like the clothes, as well. :]
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 4:09 pm
Sign-up Free ^^
I think if you made her head a little more narrow, and re-positioned her legs, it'd get rid of some of that oddness. As they are right now, they're a bit off-center. Just shift the right leg towards the left a little.
Part of the reason the legs look a bit wonky is because of some of the folds, I think it makes her knees look a little farther down than they otherwise would be.
On the "Whoa, cool!" side, though, I you did a really nice job on the face. Lovely eyes, bright smile. She's really pretty. I quite like the clothes, as well. :]
Thanks! Although I don't get the thing about making her head thinner...
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 8:16 pm
Ooh! I love the face. Basically, Sign-up Free took care of it for me, except, for the style, I'm not sure the head needs to be thinned. Anyway, the wrist needs to be a little thinner, it's kinda chunky. And... maybe there should be a fold or two around where the basketball is pressed against the shirt. But, really, delicious folds except for the legs and that one place. I also love the top part of the entire thing... you used the whole collar-bone, shoulders, and jugular thing smoothly. Very lovely! n_n
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Posted: Fri Dec 29, 2006 10:03 am
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Posted: Fri Dec 29, 2006 12:10 pm
I think it might just be the placement of the left (our left) leg. Like, it's not wide enough considering how the hips shift a bit to the right.
I think if you just widen the space a tad, make it a little more obvious that her hip is sticking out, it would be a big improvement. smile
And I think her face is fine too, though her shoulders are a little small. ^^;
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