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PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 4:52 pm


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Ah, very interesting! I should read that!

I sometimes go into Spanish mode...it's good practice for school...


I'm too stupid for spanish


Nobody's too stupid for spanish!


Nobody but me!


NOOOO!


I'm stooopid like a fox (again, another Lenore quote)


Nice.
PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 5:01 pm


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Nobody's too stupid for spanish!


Nobody but me!


NOOOO!


I'm stooopid like a fox (again, another Lenore quote)


Nice.


Yup!

Punk vs Emo


moon_child_27

PostPosted: Mon May 14, 2007 3:19 pm


I'm sorry, but I must...


BUMPETH!
PostPosted: Mon Jul 23, 2007 8:09 pm


I was bored, so here you go!

Alternate Ending

He hesitated, and said something that I never expected.
"I love you." At this I had to stop and stare. He looked like he really meant it, and I knew he meant it when he walked towards me and kissed me on the lips. I felt a tingle go throughout my whole body as I kissed back. All too soon, I pulled back to catch my breath.
"I love you too." We kissed again, this one a bit longer. I wrapped my arms around his neck and pulled him closer. I could feel his grin against my mouth, and I felt as though this was what I've been waiting for my entire life. We pulled apart and leaned our foreheads against one another. I smiled.
"Now go out there and rock! They're waiting for you." I looked past him to see Frank, Mikey, Bob, and Ray all looking at us and grinning. Frank mouthed 'Finally!', and Mikey clapped his hands while jumping up and down. I pushed Gerard in the direction of the stage, and he walked backwards, lingering to hold my hand. He grinned one of his big, pretty smiles.
"Do you really love me?" he asked playfully.
"Of course I do."
"Will you be with me forever?"
He grabbed my hand and pulled me closer into a loving embrace. I put my lips to his neck and whispered, "To the end."


Not very different, but I had to do it.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 5:58 pm


ZOMG! I love it!!
PostPosted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 2:12 pm


GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!

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KilljoyInsanity

PostPosted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 4:40 pm


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GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!

agreed.
PostPosted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 4:45 pm


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GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!

agreed.


Have you noticed how many unfinished stories there are here? It's starting to get irritating. u.u

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moon_child_27

PostPosted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 7:31 pm


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GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!

agreed.


Have you noticed how many unfinished stories there are here? It's starting to get irritating. u.u


I know, right? It annoys me.

I'm glad you all liked the story. Be My Savior is my favorite story that I've ever written, fan fic or no. I'm real proud of it. ^_^
PostPosted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 8:09 pm


moon_child_27
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Goth Shadow
XxFearRegretxX
GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!

agreed.


Have you noticed how many unfinished stories there are here? It's starting to get irritating. u.u


I know, right? It annoys me.

I'm glad you all liked the story. Be My Savior is my favorite story that I've ever written, fan fic or no. I'm real proud of it. ^_^


Tis fantastic. There's this one fic I'm beggining to work on that, when I'm done, will be changed completely and turned into a regular story. Of course I'll keep the fanfic up, but the narrative, completely fictional one will be very, very different. Anywho, yeah.
I WISH PEOPLE WOULD GET BACK ON AND FINISH THEIR STORIES!!!!! (That means you Alex and Leann!)

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