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Posted: Fri Dec 15, 2006 6:55 pm

I kind of had this idea for a character for a while. I hate the drawing though. My anatomy sucks. At least something's wrong with the arms on the left drawing. The upper-right drawing is crappy, and the down-right drawing is better, but still, something urks me about it.

I'm tired. Maybe I should sleep.

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Posted: Fri Dec 15, 2006 6:57 pm

Also, Dasani water sucks. Le Bleu owns.

Water > Soda.

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Page Boy

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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 2:52 am

I like the style a lot.
The face seems to be at a good place right now, other parts of her need some work.

She could use some better feet. Their a little vaguely shaped and look too small to support her.

Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 12:27 pm

Velderia, remove the watermark crap. Nobody's going to want to steal these drawings.

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Tawney

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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 4:02 pm

Keratin

Velderia, remove the watermark crap. Nobody's going to want to steal these drawings.

rofl

Anyway.

Yeah... nice sketches. I'd like to see some more with more detail. biggrin

Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 8:19 pm

Keratin

Velderia, remove the watermark crap. Nobody's going to want to steal these drawings.

xd

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Dr. Valentine
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Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2006 1:37 am

There is a decent sense of life in the one illustration where her eyes can be seen. I do think that she needs a lot of work from the neck down though.

Her right breast in the full body shot seems more like a "middle breast" if you see what I mean.

Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2006 1:53 pm

Dr. Valentine

There is a decent sense of life in the one illustration where her eyes can be seen. I do think that she needs a lot of work from the neck down though.

Her right breast in the full body shot seems more like a "middle breast" if you see what I mean.

Ah, yeah, I see what you mean.

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Gardenhead

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Posted: Sat Dec 23, 2006 9:44 pm

I like this character, but I think the left breast should be moved a bit. Also, the arm seems a bit long and angled slightly strangely. Maybe moving the pockets up and shortening the hand would be good that way.

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