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 Posted: Sun Oct 24, 2004 1:22 pm
Derek Keebler KojimaAmano Pogo: So you write Prose? Longer pieces then... I'd be interested in reading some of your work Pogo. May I see some of your stuff please? And as for Derick: I also write some love poems! heart I write 'free style' too I suppose. Though I will write in a certain format from time to time, it gives me challenges... they are all rough drafts, but Im getting them published soon ^_^ Ill put them up here as soon as I think they are good enough Alright Pogo! You really need to post your poetry here! Why wouldn't it be Worthy of being posted here? We are all fellow Dorks... we will except what you have! blaugh
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Posted: Sun Oct 24, 2004 1:24 pm
omnispork i write Haikus, mostly becuase im to lazy to write anythings longer. So you write haiku's eh? I can't write Haiku's, they're too complicated for me. They must come real easy for you if all you write are Haikus. Why don't you post some up here... I'd like to read your style Omnispork. 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Oct 24, 2004 1:35 pm
Miru_Miru i dont really care what kind of poetry it is except i dont like the kind of poetry that talks about all of the happy things in the world because then when lil childlers read it then there gonna think there's nothing wrong witht eh world when there is! Well Miru, I don't think that's quite true. I understand you may get that outlook because a lot of the fresman I've spoken with in Highschool (I've graduated already but I went back to check out a Writer's Group) have this morphed idea that poetry needs to have a set way of writing (and that most of the time it should rhyme) it. But believe me, when you grow older, you become exposed to the world, (if I may say that) and you learn and come to realize that poetry doesn't have to have set boundries, and you don't have to meet anyones certain criteria or level but your own. I don't like ALL 'happy poetry', but there are those that are very talented at writing poetry about life such as E. E. Cummings. He has a unique style and a way of expressing emotions that fall true and do not cloud the mind of the reader of a false reality. (whoops... lots of spelling errors... oh well.)
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Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2005 1:32 pm
a wittle side note for you kitties and tomcats, me ma and I were a yappin while we waited for the doc (i had somthing in my eye). she said somthing like, "I'm glad you wernt born in the 50-60's. you'd have ended up a beatnik". I, of course, broke into crazy beatnik rymes. I remeber one of em. Pretty groovy peice a thought.
Four iv For Not, By Jonathan Yaeger (cough*me*cough)
Pretty P. Culturewench is surely a square.
*drum beats*
she has four corners
*four medium speed drum beats*
she has four sides
*four fast drum beats*
Still,*one drum beat* She is not *one drum beat* whole
*one realy loud drum beat*
she may have four v's
*four fast drum beats*
She may have four I's
*four medium speed drum beats, the first is played at the same time as "I's"
Yet Pretty P. Culturewench has not a soul. *throws hand down as if to strike drum, but stops the hand right before it touches the drum head*
FIN
for the lazy in the crowd ill exsplain all the art i injected into this. First off, the obvious one. the four drum beats represent the four corners/sides. congrats for noticing. A little deeper in.... A drum beat there is between "she is not" and "whole". It throws off the rythem! it's suposed to. It fragments the sentance. It's no longer whole. the four v's and four I's. perhapes corners and sides? And the non-beat at the end? what a what is that jiven bout? the souless form is an empty vessel. the final strike was an empty beat. Feel and know the titles great synergy. look at a square. it's I-V I-V I-V I-V all the way round and anon, yey, into eternity. but if you only count each one once, your looking at four (iv) four times times my freind. And for not? the souless. figure it out.
*SNAP SNAP SNAP SNAP SNAP SNAP SNAP SNAP SNAP*
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Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2005 2:08 pm
I'm freeform?
I just write, I dunno all the formal things about poems, but I some of my poems are organized.
We should write haikus. Write a haiku for the person above you? -chuckles-
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Posted: Sun Apr 03, 2005 11:19 pm
Edgar Allan Poe:
As I sit here clicking,
clack type typing. Behind secured and bolted bedroom door.
A noise which keeps on creaking.
Squeak and rusty speaking a chair which needs some greasing.
Quoth the raven, Nevermore!
Shel Silverstein:
I typed a sentence, I typed it good.
I typed it all around the neighborhood.
But in my rush I must have not been neat,
The neighbors like pica instead of elite!
(That's a typing joke for all you real dorks out there!)
e.e. cummings
I Type
a
sentence
Down, down
down.
My own twisted verse:
More to the point, of when I type
is the rhythm of verse over rhyming hype.
I often like meter, and poetic refrain.
Or leave a short blank.
Then try it ....
another time.
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