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NinetailedNightmare

PostPosted: Wed Dec 06, 2006 1:08 pm


I've already got a great kid here at D-Corp, Canti, but the boy was achieved through a FS. Before then, I was rolling another idea around in my head. I don't know if it's worth keeping, or if I'll ever get him, but I figured I might as well post. Please feel free to drop some comments or suggestions- they are much appreciated.

†Intro†
†The Child†
†The Jackal†
†The Guardian†
†OOC Plans†
†Donations/ors†
†Reserve†
†Reserve†
PostPosted: Wed Dec 06, 2006 1:31 pm


The Child
It's a boy? Or a beast?


Name: Jaedin

Gender: Male

DNA: Black-backed Jackal (Canis mesomelas)

Appearance:

Build: The kid is more of a jackal than he is a boy. Like Sharika, he's a bit of an anthromorph. His ears are long and filled with soft, sensitive hair. His build will be compact and muscle-ridden, but at first he's horribly short.

Fur Color: Tan varying into shades of brown. Markings are black fur.

Hair Color: Black perhaps streaked with a bit of silver.

Hair Style: Starting from toddler, it will be long and straight, but unkempt and in his eyes. Exact length is probably about mid-back length.

Eye Color: Red

Eye Style: Slanted like a wolf's. The whites around a normal eye are black on his, giving his irises a sort of glowing look.

Distinguishing Features: Jackal head, long neck, fur, fluffy tail...

Markings: Jagged line under each eye extending into small lines dripping down his cheeks. Back has various black marks down it in no particular shapes, probably thick.

Personality: From the beginning, the jackal boy is vicious. He makes his jaws and claws known even as a toddler, snapping almost mindlessly at whoever gets too close. He is not without cunning, however, and may use false docile motions to draw his prey closer.

NinetailedNightmare


NinetailedNightmare

PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 2:47 pm


The Guardian
Organized Crime


So who is he?

Name's Finesse, Finesse Grigori. He's a young man in his early twenties, all pale-skinned and dark haired. Aside from the fact he is Italian-born, he doesn't divulge much about himself. Despite his suited appearance, Finesse is a rather loose individual. He is kind, polite, and over all nice guy. He enjoys most of the simple pleasures in life- fine music, fine wine, good company, and cooking. One could even go so far to call him a family man, having taken in a wayward child he and a woman found loose in the woods. Not only has he managed to co-care with her for the boy, but often enough he finds himself trying to become involved in her extensive family as well. Is it a warm relationship to come? Perhaps. Only time will tell.

Okay, so what's so interesting about him?

And that, my friends, is the million-dollar question. Even though he makes it a secret when he isn't on duty, Finesse is heavily involved in a mafia-type organization. In fact, he oversees and plans crimes to be committed. Whether it is exterminating a gang who didn't choose to shake hands and be friends with his 'family' or robbing a bank of its investments, Finesse is one of the few behind it. Sounds like a pretty important job, right? Well it is, but certainly not the best one you can have. He still has to take risks and has only a smaller chance of getting killed than the goons he sends in to do the work. He is by no means the highest, but he likes his job a lot.

Why him?

Violence is something the young mafia man is accustomed to. In a situation where there is pressure, he works very well. The jackal child is by no means someone to overlook just because they are young. He is vicious and conniving, not to mention intimidating. Finesse is a very controlled man, but he will not be pushed unless he wants to be. Jaedin won't be getting far trying to fight him when he's got a pistol up his nose.

Also, Finesse is good at heart. He'll want to make the boy something more than a growling beast.

How to convince him?

D-Corp is not beyond blackmail, and Finesse is not without dirt. Back in Christmas, Finesse claimed to have had his goons hassle one of the techs that had been sent out to sell fundraiser eggs. Instead of trying to tackle a whole mafia that has blended in to the rest of society, they could target the group's leader. Surely he can be a candidate for taking care of their experiment that came out more animal than a boy? And if not, hey, at least they get revenge if he's eaten. Maybe they could have photographic proof of he and his goons ruining the stand? The fact that Tsunake ('girlfriend') has one of their fundraiser dragons?
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