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My new poem, Rubies

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Milkshake-in-a-Cup

PostPosted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 1:57 am


Rubies
The feeling is strong,
Liking, loving, hating,
Falling hearts and raining rubies,
The stitches are bleeding once more.

The black lines with black crosses,
Around the body, crying their red tears,
Liking you makes me smile, loving you hurts,
Hating you; of the most makes me bleed from every inch of my body,
This time it’s a storm.

The gems are falling; emerald, sapphire and amethyst, but the ruby is not seen.
The ruby is rare and comes from the stitches, and not the skin,
So please hand the scissors and the string;
For then I can make more rubies,
And make it bleed a bow.

Make a puddle, a creek, a river,
Let’s all take a shower; oh yes,
Feeling dirty with all the black marks,
Feeling rich with these gems and crystals,
I sometimes ask myself is being rich worth the pain?

Oh great, a bay, a sea, a ocean,
Let’s take a swim; it feels like summer,
The stitches are burning; black attracts the heat;
Now let’s cool it off with the rain, the rain of rubies.

It sizzles and scorches
Itches and aggravates,
Fees like burning torches,
The pain is stronger than ever, it makes me scream.

The rubies and backfired, and backstabbed,
They’re sharp like blades,
They shine like stars,
They’re killers on the outside; but priceless on the out;
Just let it hail, its summer time…
PostPosted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 6:04 am


So beautifull surprised 3nodding heart

NLgal


Milkshake-in-a-Cup

PostPosted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 9:39 am


NLgal
So beautifull surprised 3nodding heart

Thanks! Sorry if it was rough, I did that in 5 mins.
PostPosted: Fri Dec 15, 2006 7:52 am


Razorblade-x-milkshake
NLgal
So beautifull surprised 3nodding heart

Thanks! Sorry if it was rough, I did that in 5 mins.

i see some mistakes >_< but its ok 3nodding

NLgal


Milkshake-in-a-Cup

PostPosted: Fri Dec 15, 2006 7:49 pm


NLgal
Razorblade-x-milkshake
NLgal
So beautifull surprised 3nodding heart

Thanks! Sorry if it was rough, I did that in 5 mins.

i see some mistakes >_< but its ok 3nodding

I thought there would be. 3nodding
PostPosted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 3:23 pm


I can picture it... O.o

Is that weird?


Edcy


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Milkshake-in-a-Cup

PostPosted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 3:09 am


Edcy
I can picture it... O.o

Is that weird?

No not all, I like it when people picture my poems.

Though, did you like it?
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