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 Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 7:18 pm
I don't really have any usefull critique, but...
I just want to say that I really love this idea. ARU is such an interesting character with a great backstory. Just... it's really rather genius, and his talent sounds like a lot of fun! You've done a great job balancing the character, making up his history, describing him, etc, etc, etc. I'm really looking forward to seeing you get into the cirque.
Good luck!
-Silverah
(Oh, and as a sidenote, have you ever seen a show called The Zeta Project? It just occured to me that the characters are both shape-shifting robots.)
And as for a title...
"The Mechanical Illusionist"
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 12:37 pm
*pounces Silv* <33 Thanks for coming by!
I haven't seen Zeta Project, no. surprised I'll have to check out what I can find about it, though; it sounds like I might be able to get some ideas from it for ARU. x3
And ohh... I like that title, actually! *sticks it up on the list* XD I think I'm gonna try and get one or two more, then put them all up for vote and see what people think is best. Thanks for the suggestion!
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Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 7:35 am
Whee, poll posted; need votes~
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Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 10:06 am
I like "the mechanical illusionist," but that's mostly because I made it up. xd
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Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 2:53 pm
I was too dignified to vote in my own poll, WOE IS ME.
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 11:32 pm
I like "KhamaileÅn" which is the original Greek word for Chameleon. Random.
Anyway I know you want critiques but I just can't @_@ ... It's so well-rounded and it seems someone else already got to the only fault thought possible. All I can do is worship the goodness which is a fantastic concept and bask in it.
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 7:00 am
It looks awesome... I have no idea how to pronounce that, though. XD Is it basically like "Chamelon", or is there some key difference...?
x3 I appreciate you coming by, anyway. I got a decent critique for your concept up in your thread, so I hope that it helps!
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 11:38 am
Same thing, just different spelling *nerd* XD!
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Posted: Fri May 25, 2007 2:44 pm
AGGGGH HOLY CRAP WHAT COMPLETED?!
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