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Do you write poetry or short stories often?
oui
80%
 80%  [ 17 ]
non
19%
 19%  [ 4 ]
Total Votes : 21


Scarlet Kyta

PostPosted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 11:57 am


Uchiha_hime29
"No Name"
Life travels before my eyes
Full of darkness between the lines
The Scars of my wounds will heal
But the pain shall fall down and kneel
Lucifer is awakened by my touch
As my hands burn in his clutch
He says" Dearest child your blood is cold
Your Porcelien face I cant bare to hold
Dearest Child share thoust pain
To rid thy misery and any shame
"Dearest one I will not betray you
But I fear a path might be lead
My heart has been torn by lite
My darkness fearing ran out of site
A choice had to be made by the end of my sun
A choice between My Pet and thoust dearest one
The choice...My choice cannot be made
"Dearest child my love for you is pure and strong
And I will be with you from dusk till dawn
Our souls are conncected as if life and death
But I cannot be your hero for anymore quest
My spirit will always lift you during sorrow
Our raven will always be there to follow
Cresent the Nile with her vivide waves
Know that I will never be to far away
"Dearest one you soar through me like air
Catching my breath with only a glare
My Pet can be untaimed and wild
But with time and paticence so be like your child
As I seek the moon at its brightest of the nite
I know your with me as though in site
Releasing me high above the sky
I'll always think of you soaring much more high"
We share our thoughts and rid our pain
And with that we haev much more to gain
Lite as a feather, Dark as the Nile
Nothing can break us not even for miles
Vivide as the stars of the nite glow
Shimmer the diomands our hearts will flow
As the Sirius passes before the eye
A deep sleep upon you unbearable I cry
Forever in my heart you will always rise
Never will you be in the darkness of the lines
As I lose your smile I gain your love
Forever you'll soar through me up above.

*COPYRIGHT * It actually is so plz


The poem was ok, but you went over the limit...only 30 lines.
PostPosted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 12:03 pm


NO MORE ENTRIES! TODAY WAS THE OFFICIAL DEADLINE. ANY MORE ENTRIES AND YOU ARE DISQUALIFIED!

It shall take me a week or two in order to "grade" them. Judges, for the last freakin time, GIVE ME YOUR RATINGS! I'm allowing judge ratings to be p.m.ed to me until the 20th. I shall then give out the prizes as soon as I can gather all the data into order.
I shall then post a couple of my poems and let you rate them, just for the fun of it...
GOOD LUCK TO ALL! biggrin

Scarlet Kyta


Scarlet Kyta

PostPosted: Sat Jul 23, 2005 4:27 pm


I HAVE THE WINNERS OF THE CONTEST! just so you know, I did not accept bribes or anything from anyone and the contest was completely and utterly fair.

sad In last place is Lothoran with "Higher".


smile In second place is KitsumeChanSexyness with "Useless Journey".


3nodding And in first place is Seperia with "Bestow My Heart". (which says something because I usually don't like romantic poems)


biggrin I have sent the trades...And to keep my promise, I will let you rate a couple of my poems. Just let me rumage through my crap so I can find some good ones wink
PostPosted: Sat Jul 23, 2005 4:44 pm


you all are so talented. I can't join. U ppl would make me look bad. sweatdrop

Mz_Boom_Ba_Stick


Napalm = Fun

PostPosted: Sat Jul 23, 2005 4:47 pm


Inkhart
you all are so talented. I can't join. U ppl would make me look bad. sweatdrop


I would be the same way too... My stuff is a bunch of Death Metal and Punk lyrics, which aren't... poetic...
PostPosted: Sat Jul 23, 2005 4:50 pm


yeah.

Mz_Boom_Ba_Stick


Scarlet Kyta

PostPosted: Sat Jul 23, 2005 5:23 pm


would you all please go to meh journal and read the story in it? Then tell me what you think in the comment thingy? I would greatly appreciate it.
PostPosted: Sat Jul 23, 2005 8:25 pm


crying good job to all crying ..............i wish i won.................but how did you like my poem? probly not a lot cause you don't like romantic ones! but you said thats what the subject had to be.......... crying

chii_kitsune


Mz_Boom_Ba_Stick

PostPosted: Sat Jul 23, 2005 8:40 pm


I liked it. heart
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