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 Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2004 12:03 pm
Do I draw well? ermm.... Here's my latest work in progress. Based off a refence pic. (she'll be wearing a skirt when it's done.)  Comments, critiques and heaping amounts of coffee greatly appreciated.
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Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2004 4:09 pm
I really love the style. XD Can't wait to see it done. *hands over her coffee*
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Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2004 5:32 pm
A very serene feeling pic. I like the color choices, shadows, and her hair a lot.
I see a couple anatomy issues though.
One thing is her hand, which looks like it's still being worked on so I'm not going to be nitpicky about it in particular. However, the way it's stuck to the arm is weird. Maybe thinning the wrist at the left side of the forearm might help, because right now there is a lump there as it goes to the hand.
Another thing is the shoulder/chest on the right side. There is no hint of her shoulder on that side, which contradicts the way the shirt is laying (which suggests it is a more 3/4ths view than a side view).
Anyways, it's coming along well and I hope you share the finished drawing with us biggrin
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Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2004 10:55 pm
Its such a nice pic. I think the chest is drawn wrongly...((something like that))
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Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2004 2:11 pm
I would correct the chest. It looks like it's at a different view then everything else, which makes it look severely messed up. If It's a she there should be a decently disticly breast, or at least a hint of one. the shirt should go onto her shoulder, also.
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Posted: Fri Oct 22, 2004 4:21 am
I like except, She has no breast and also shadowing seems wrong
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Posted: Sun Oct 24, 2004 7:50 pm
It's a pretty nice and simple style of drawing, but there are some problems with your shading on the arm. With just the line, instead of shaping it a bit more to make it look like her arm's a bit toned, it just looks rather flat and rigid. Also, keep up the shading process by shading her chest, but other than that, the rest of it should turn out pretty nice. 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2004 2:18 pm
Very realistic and earthy... but it would be cool if you finished it biggrin .
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Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2005 5:02 pm
It looks good to me heart
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