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Posted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 11:48 am
I have also written this on a other site and I promise it get's better!
Abbie has shoulder lenght black hair with a hint of purple. She has her nose pierced[ but her friends had to drag her to get it as she hates needles]she is medium height
Hannah has dirty blonde hair that goes just past her shoulder. She has her nose and lip pierced and want's to get more. She is a little bit taller than Frank.
Hannah's POV
It had been a long month but now the day had arrived. "OH what do I wear" moaned Abbie searching through her closet. "Well what ever you wear can you hurry up" I replied. Finally after half an hour Abbie picked her Helena dress." Finally" I shouted. I was so surprised when I found out I had won the competion to get backstage passes and meet My Chemical Romance I never thought I would win, but I did and I chose my best friend who I had know since my first day at Highmore " Come on lets go" Abbie grabbed my hand and dragged me to the front door " we've got loads of time"" Please" " Oh alright but that's only because I want to get the best place at the front
NEXT CHAPTER
Hannah's POV
I pulled out of the drive and drove of to the concert. As I was about to park the car Abbie opened the door and jumped out. 'you idiot' I said 'I know but MCR are doing this to me' said Abbie smiling. It was good to see her smiling again I mean since the accident she hasn't been the same. I parked the car and locked it. Abbie was about half way to the arena. 'Abbie wait' I screamed She stood where she was until I caught up with her. We walked into the arena and pushed our way through the crowd to the front. When the doors opened we ran to the front and waited for MCR. When Gerard and the rest of MCR came out they kicked the concert of with To The End. After rocking out to MCR for 2 hours. We decided to head backstage. I could tell Abbie was getting nervous as she was biting her nails 'calm down' I said 'But..what..what if they don't like me, more to the point what if Gerard doesn't' 'urgh they will love you and Gerard will think your amazing ' I said hoping that would make her feel good. When we got to the back stage area the security guards asked us for are passes we proudly showed them 'OMG Gerard is somewhere I've gotta find him' Abbie said. We were walking around trying to find the room where they were when I felt a tap on my back I swivelled around and there standing in front of us was Frank. My heart skipped a couple of beats I swear. 'are you two ladies lost he said ' 'erm...u....yeah' I managed to say. Suddenly there was a thump Abbie had fainted. Oh no not again Abbie must of got so worked up 'sorry about her' 'it's ok' he picked her up in his arms 'I'm sort of used to this I mean girls fainting or running up to but going speechless' 'So you're alright with it then' I said 'Yeah sure now what did you say again about being back here' 'I didn't say any thing but we won a competion to meet the band' 'ah so you're the lucky winners then, follow me' Frank said turning around. I followed behind. If Abbie new that frank had been carrying her well you know she would probably faint. Suddenly frank said 'here we are' I have a story plot. There is a sequal to this. I have already finished the first one on a other site. As I said it does get better. Abbie and Hannah were made up in my head
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Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2007 8:02 pm
i rather like it. i'm interested as to see where it goes.
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Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2007 7:24 am
I like it! I thought it was funny when she fainted. The sad thing is that I probably would too sweatdrop I'd love to see more of your writing!
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Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 11:37 am
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