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 Posted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 9:07 am
Thoughts
When I am all alone, envy me most.
Then, my thoughts flutter round me in glimmering hosts,
some dressed in silver, some dressed in white,
each like a taper blossoming light;
most of them merry, some of them grave;
each of them lithe as willows that wave;
some having violets, some having bay;
one with a burning rose hidden away.
When I am alone, envy me then,
for I have better friends than women and men
Ashley Kemp
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Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 9:01 am
i really like it! what inspired you!? 4laugh
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Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2006 1:31 am
Yes, it's pretty cool. Especially the last two lines.
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Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2006 4:38 am
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Posted: Fri Dec 22, 2006 9:07 pm
It's very interesting. Maybe you could explain more about the poem for us.
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Posted: Fri Dec 22, 2006 10:26 pm
I don't think it needs to be explained. It's short, simple and it has a great meaning. I like it. I like it enough to want to put it on my profile if the author would PM me with their consent.
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Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 7:07 pm
Nice rhythm with your syllables. I generally don't like rhyming poems... but this one isn't half balf.
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