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 Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 10:26 am
Quote: Yan hated the taste of blood but by now he was used to it. It begins with the wonderful mental image of a gay boy biting down on his lip as he has sex behind a club. whee
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 1:18 am
A dew drop settles tragically on a young woman's sleeping eyelid.
setting anyone?? ^^
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 10:45 am
Quote: I sat alone on the top of the hill for the first time in months. I've noticed recently that most of my stories begin with a sentence similar to that. In fact, I've found that they are becoming more and more angsty as well. Dunno if that's good or bad.
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 11:29 am
And Paying in Naivety Quote: Yan hated the taste of blood but by now he was used to it. It begins with the wonderful mental image of a gay boy biting down on his lip as he has sex behind a club. whee Actually, the sentence makes me think of vampy novels. o.O
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 7:39 pm
"Edana slid open the door to the apartment."
Nothing special; it does nothing, and it might be changed.
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 10:17 pm
Mine t'would be: Quote: The harsh winds of winter whispered passed the windows of the little cottage. It doesn't look very special, but the Prelude is vastly amusing.
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Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 10:52 am
"There was a little bit of light shining from a wall to the left."
My MC is running away, so he's looking for a way out. I'm definitely changing it in DEcember.
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 10:00 pm
"Rigel felt Bellatrix and Betelgeuze shining through his amber beer."
Rigel, Bellatrix and Betelgeuze = stars in the constellation Orion.
Ya, them's the breaks. ninja
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 10:11 am
Rain poured down from the bleak sky as Pamilia Vilken walked along the sidewalk on her way to the Master House.
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Posted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 3:33 pm
'Alexander Winter walked through the threshold of a small, heated café with a sigh of relief.'
^.^
Well, I've done worse.
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Posted: Sat Nov 01, 2008 8:21 pm
The summer had just begun when the unthinkable became thinkable and actually happened.
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Posted: Sun Nov 02, 2008 1:31 am
Quote: It has been almost five years ago since I came to this world; but it seemed that I still did not know all there was to know. If bouncing off from my first book. ^_^ xd
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Posted: Sun Nov 02, 2008 6:22 am
Quote: Dylan sat out on the balcony of his Waikiki condo with his feet stuck through the guard rail and let the breeze blow across the bottoms and through his toes. Howzat? wink
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Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2008 12:55 am
Quote: Cold and clammy, the fog surrounded Jak as he stood at the portside rail, his hands gripping the rusted steel as he took long, slow breaths and fought not to vomit again. That's the first line of the book, but... Quote: "I fail to see how that's supposed to make me feel better," Zaiden said, his tone icy as he cleaned himself up. is the first line I wrote in November.
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Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 12:33 am
"It began with a slight darkening of the sky to the east, from a pure azure to a color closer to resembling the blue of a deep body of water."
...I like my sunsets too much. Though they are kind of relevant to the plot. Also, subject to change due to my failure at coming up with good color descriptors at that point in time.
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