I hope you're getting along well, also. I am sorry to hear such a thing.
I don't really know much about Kingdom Hearts either, but Lady X.tasy is right. Your writing does have a good rhythm. You write pretty well, it's very understandable. The bios were very descriptive; that I liked.
-Skye Shard-
I guess no one likes my writings...ah well...
(I have to finish chapter 4...been procrastinating on it a bit too much..but why should I care if no one else doesn't? Even though when we get to Sora, it's going to be much better...but as I said..who cares?) You should care, because writing is obviously something you enjoy. It doesn't matter if anyone else cares, because you're expressing yourself in a healthy, enjoyable way. I've had a short story up on a website for the longest time. I've only got one review, but it's still a start (of course, I am a little antsy for more, but these things you can't rush
3nodding ). You just have to remember that, with as many topics and threads as there are out there, there's always going to be a small chance that yours is chosen by someone to read. But that small chance is better than no chance at all! And there's also another chance that that small chance will spread the word about your story!
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