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LadyChaos1138

PostPosted: Sun Oct 22, 2006 9:22 pm


I own a small production company called Scurvy Sparrow Productios and in March we are starting filming on our first moviel. I would like to put the plot up and let me know what you think. It's a thriller.

Also, THe title is not meant to offend anyone the story is really about repression and what happens when you a society represses itself. Also a f** in England is a cigarette.

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THe basic story is this in a small (ficititious) midwestern city, Manchester Ohio, a string of murders have taken place in the gay community. We start off in the midde of this when a drag queen is killed at a gay club called Onyx. Her body has been strangled in the car park of the club. Our main characters Detective Emma Granger and Detective Joe Stanlin are called to the scene the next morning. Joe is the guy everyone likes, and Emma is a British Detective who used to be a Jr. Detective for Scotland Yard in England. Where Joe is laid back Emma is a severe type A personality. THey arrive on the scene to find the evidence has washed away due to rain. And they hear news that a gay man named Sean has escaped from Sunderland Mental Institution. He is the number 1 suspect. Emma is a huge soccer fan and supports Manchester United, she is agitated because it's a game day. Her and Joe go out for breakfast and discuss the case and than head out to Sunderland to investigate. At Sunderland they learn that Sean was sent there at the age of 12 by his very Catholic family for Degayification. Emma is appalled. Gaining the information they need Joe and Emma head back to a sports bar to watch Emma's game and talk to the other cops. THe cops are watching a football game and regailing Joe of a raid on a gay bar the previous night and making all lsorts of homophobic jokes. The next day another murder occurs, That night Joe's wife is murdered. Joe is called by the chief of police that sometime that night he needs to talk to Joe. The chief is killed impaled ona pitchfork. And Joe and Emma have dinner together Emma tells Joe about why shes in England and tells him he's her only friend in the country. They than revieve calls that The chief is dead. At the police station Emma finds evidence the only evidene that's been overlooked she can't place it. And are told that Sean has been found. and is driving a car. They hop into a squad car and start chasing him. It ends in an underpass where Joe flips, the evidence sllips into place and Emma realizes that Joe not Sean is the killer. Joe starts monologuing about how he's really gay but has been repressing it for years and how when he was 16 at bible camp he came onto another boy and the kids in his bunk brutally beating and torturing him. Realizing what's happening Emma attempts to save Sean but is tortured into insanity herselfs and Joe has fixed it so that without a doubt the cops think Sean did it. Sean is taken to jail, Emma is taken to Sunderland and Joe flees. The End
PostPosted: Thu May 03, 2007 12:51 pm


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