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sparklypiggy

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Posted: Sat Oct 21, 2006 11:03 pm

At this moment, I am rather bored, and thinking of coloring something in MSPaint for fun. I randomly chose this little sketch, and so I'd like the public's opinion before I do anything to it. I'll have the original, yes, but still, it's always nice to know.

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Don't be too harsh, please. Then I'd be a little bit mad and a little bit sad. D;<

Also, sorry if it's a bit big. o.o;;

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Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2006 12:06 am

In general, it's really not bad 3nodding . Some things to work on might be your lines, and proportions. The lines are a bit thick and messy, and the head seems a tad small for the body.

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sparklypiggy

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Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2006 9:47 am

Oh! Thankies, thankies. I'll remember that about the lines; it seems to come up often when I'm receiving crits. I just kinda drew this and threw it on the scanner, so... o_o
Also, she's 15 or 16, so I think she's the correct height. 7 heads, yes?

Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2006 7:55 pm

THis is really good for a sketch and throw on the scanner piece.
One thing I'm noticing other thann the head-size was the collar bone lines. They're kinda wavy and one seems to droop lower than the other and the definition of her breasts isn't really that apparent but some people choose it to be that way so if thats how you like em' then right on.
I love the hands <3
Since i'm not very good at them I really admire how people draw them.
You could probably make the foot on the left slightly wider and maybe show some lines around the ankle to show that the shoe goes all the way around.
Overall, I reall like tha clothes xD
They're very pretty :]

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