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ladyumbra

PostPosted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 3:40 pm


Welcome to my quest thread, yes I know I already have Kishi but I love Tobais' concept as well and he really only works within Gotp.

Directory
1. Directory
2. About Liches
3. About Tobias
4. More about Tobias
5. Guardian and home
PostPosted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 3:43 pm


About Liches

Picture references:
http://www.nascr.net/~jcburd/lich.jpg
http://www.tibianews.net/img/cipsoft/Lich.jpg

Through the use of powerful spells, items and incantations, users of magic have long been able to prolong their mortal lives beyond what is considered to be the standard life expectancy for their particular race. To continue pushing back the fingers of death is a goal that requires years of training, study and research. Although the magic can sustain an individual's life force, inevitably their body will continue to age and wither away as time marches on.

Mages (especially necromancers) and clerics who tend to serve the dark gods have been known to take a different route in the search for what is, essentially, eternal life. Rather than fighting death, they have sought to embrace it

( Necromancy is not in this concept at least simply magic it is an art that requires much study, ritual and sacrifice like alchemy. anyone can do it)




Liches that were once clerics appear to have a special affinity with other undead creatures. Anyone foolish enough to invade the lair of one of these monsters is likely to encounter several "lesser" undead (acting as guards and servants) before running into the head creature. It's wise to think of these early meetings as warnings of what lies ahead and that, assuming a quick death has been avoided, turning back now is the best course of action.

In the unlikely event that it should require assistance, any Lich is able to summon aid to its location. This is accomplished simply as a result of concentration and help will appear in the form of whatever undead is in the local area. While reinforcements can take a few minutes to arrive, this is still extremely bad news for any opponent of the Lich (even undead beholders will respond to the monster's call).

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Liches convert themselves into a skeletal undead creature by means of black magic and necromancy, storing their soul in a magical receptacle called a phylactery. They do so to extend their life in order to study the deepest levels of magic. With their soul bound to a material focus, they can never truly die. If their body is destroyed, a lich can simply regenerate or find a new one in a relatively quick manner. According to the mythos, the only way to truly destroy a lich is to first destroy its phylactery, thereby removing their anchor to the material world, and then destroy its physical form.

ladyumbra


ladyumbra

PostPosted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 3:51 pm


Some important info about Tobias


Name: Tobias

Gender:
Male

Species: Human/Lich
Abilities:

1. To raise the dead be they human or animal, magic or otherwise.( Make note this is raise them not bring them back to life, they are animated corpses with only the knowledge/skills they had when they died. They cannot learn new things once raised.) This takes a hell of a lot of life energy and is not going to be all that common. The ability to raise magical beings from the dead would damn near kill him unless he was sorcerer.
This power won't really be used until teen stage, as a kid Tobias would have a hard time raising anything bigger and more complex than a baby chicken. ( Must be kid stage or older)

Cost: Aside from causing mental strain doing this takes up part of his max amount of life energy he can expend within one day. Also doing so will between teen and adult force his transformation to progress as his ties with the dead grow. Also the longer something has been dead the harder it is to raise.



2. The ability to speak to the dead. Some what useful but there is limits to what the dead know and they aren't always helpful. Also only creatures that can actually talk can talk to Tobias I.e a magical undead cat beast known for talking to people could but not a normal undead cat. ( Must be toddler or older)

Cost: Life energy much like the above, also Tobias cannot commune with spirits aka ghosts , if he wishes to speak to one who is dead he must raise them himself or they must approach him.

3. The ability to control the dead. This ability will start small and it will take great time and practice before he can control even a handful of people at the same time. ( must be Kid or older)

Cost: Again Life energy but also mental energy as it will be a strain on his mind to direct others while trying to do other things.( He can imbue them with energy and give a simple command to guard or patrol to lessen the strain but it's still there) Tobias can return those he's risen back to their graves ( or just suck the energy back out of them and leave them where they are) in order to regain what energy they have left in them.

Scenario : Tobias wants sentries to guard someplace. He uses most of one day's energy to raise those he wants ( Probably those who were fighters of some sort in the past) about five or so people. This drains him for most of the day and what energy he has left is spent controlling the group i.e directing them to stay in one place and do nothing.

The next day ( provided he's worked to gain more energy) he imbues them with enough energy to walk around doing rounds and to run or fight if needed.( About another day's worth of energy for him) From this point on the sentries keep moving ( having been given orders which they should be intelligent enough to carry out) until they run out of the energy stored in them when at which point they become immobile until they receive more energy.

4. Paralyzing/painfull touch: This ability appears when Tobias is a full Lich. One touch from his bony fingers hurts or paralyzes whomever is being touched .

Cost: Tobias must use this ability within a certain time limit or the energy put into it is wasted.


5. Regeneration:
As an adult and full Lich Tobias can fully regenerate his skeleton when it is destroyed as long as his wand remains unharmed.

Cost: Nothing but the more extensive the damage the longer time it takes to repair.

* Life energy is the energy Tobias stores within himself that he gets from performing rituals/sacrifices of necromancy. He can only store a certain amount side him at a time ( how much depends on how hard he has worked at deepening his reservoir as well as how much he has been using. the more he uses the more he learns to control it and his reservoir grows. also Tobias limited to the amount of energy he drew from his last working. once he's out he's out.

Workings work as an exchange. Some form of energy must be sacrificed in ritual in order for it to be converted into life energy. Sometimes this sacrifice is a living things a plan or animal, sometimes it is an object said to contain it's own power like a crystal and sometimes it's the blood of the user that's required.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 3:59 pm


The past and future.


Information on their previous life:

England: date undetermined

As a child Aric was an odd one, what one back then would call morbid ( though now most would simply dismiss it as a child trying to understand death and the afterlife if there is one.) As he grew Aric was often sneered at or told to hush when he asked question pertaining to death and what happened to our bodies when we died.

He was raised typical for an English boy of his time and aside from his mishaps where his curiosity got him into trouble he was well behaved and quite normal. He had a fairly peacefull childhood in a good home with two older brother's to play with and two loving ( if concerned) parents to care for him.

When he was deemed old enough and Aric was sent away to live in a monastery as his parents felt they would be unable to return him to the rightful path a young man should go down.

This turned out to be a bad idea on his parents part as there he found a group of young apprentice monks who had the same curiosities he did. They used their precious little free time to discuss their theories and discoveries with each other.

A few years passed and one of Aric's friends found forbidden books while cleaning one day.( explanation of how said friend aquired the books will be explained Icly later in Tobias' life) The books contained information on the forbidden art of necromancy as well as information on sects and individuals who had been recorded as practicing it.

Immediately the Group began studying the books until they were found out.

Refusing to repent for the sin of thier studies and worried about possible execution for it Aric and several trainee monks left feeling that with what they had learned and how they felt they could not follow the path of monk., Though they maintained respect for those who stay behind and those who had taught them the ways of the church.


( below needs editing into narrative)
Using information from the books they manage to locate an underground clan of black magic users that study necromancy. ( At this point Aric is able to actually do small things with his necromancy though he has had little practice refusing to do much inside the monasteries hallowed grounds. )

* While Aric hones his craft he falls in love, marries and eventually has a son. ( many generations later a direct descendant of this child becomes his guardian)

* Many, many years pass, Aric studies more and becomes a fully trained necromancer. His marriage falls apart and he loses contact with his wife and child. Unwilling to die because there is so much yet to learn ( and due to the inner fear and lack of understanding about what death truly is) He spends his last years furthering his studies so that he may become a Lich.

* Lich status achieved


* Years pass and Aric's body deteriorates into a skeleton, he continues to practice necormancy teaching students as they make their way underground to him. Slowly over time he learns the truths of death and it's secrets.

* Though he enjoys teaching and watching his proteges grow under him Aric feels incomplete and lonely as many often acquire the basics then leave him to study on their own. He Raises the nightmare Lexington and over time bonds with the creature.

* Aric died when one of his students felt his method was holding them back from achieving their true power. They believed they could gain the knowledge to progress further if they could access texts he had aquired or written over the years and kept locked away and protected by risen guards. The student conned Aric into handing over his phylactery during a lesson about them and destroyed it killing the stunned Lich.

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Rebrith.


Personality from baby to adult

Baby: Tobias is a rather normal and utterly boring baby. His greatest concern is sleeping followed by eating and then sleeping again. People are pretty much all the same to him and he'll sleep on or demand food from anyone in the vicinity.



*Subject to change and be molded greatly due to rp from here on out.

Toddler: Hey look Mr. personality has appeared. Tobias has more complex thoughts at this age and opinions on everyone, though these are still limited to simply things like " He has a cookie, she not have a cookie, go with cookie person" at the beginning. As he gets closer to becoming a kid his speech and thoughts will develop a bit more but this will be a slow progression.
* Progressing from about two year old to three year old mentality all in all

He will gladly interrupt whatever you are saying to share said opinion with you as well( Whether or not you understand his babbling is irrelevant to him). Oh you have food! Well he's just a child and you won't mind sharing right? I hope not because anything that isn't nailed down food or otherwise at this age is going with Tobias.

He doesn't understand personal possessions but he does understand sharing or moreover trading and will try to swap a teddy bear for your key chain or Oreos for your dunkaroos. Whether or not the items he tries to trade with are his to begin with is always a mystery.

Tobias these days gravitates people who look interesting and will probably base all his friend making attempts on visuals only. Friends and their stuff are not exceptions to his lack of personal property rule and he will wander off with or switch things with friends ( occasionally performing a switch without offering, simply taking the item and leaving something in return)

Should he upset or anger another Tobias is likely to scuttle over into a corner and look pitifully over his shoulder until he's forgiven. He doesn't like conflict and will avoid it whenever possible including refusing to be around others who are arguing or fighting.

Kid: Tobias has Lexington again and that's all that really matters to him now. He has some memories of his time with Lex but not all and he thinks that the more time he spends with him the quicker his memories will come back.( Some memories will come to Tobias in dreams long before his quest to teen but nothing that needs be left until then).

( *Lexington is somewhat found by Jeannete after doing some family history hunting when Tobias tells her of what he saw in his dreams (especially what his name was) before becoming a kid. She finds many mysteries and rumors surrounding Aric and takes Tobias on a trip to his old monastery ( the last non secret place her records could for sure place him) hoping to see if Tobias will remember his past time there. During the week long trip Lexington senses Tobias'/ Aric's soul and returns to him out of loyalty and ends up coming home with them.)

Friends made prior to this are still friends and worth staying in contact with but Tobias isn't likely to seek out anyone knew as he focuses on re-bonding with Lex.

Tobias has gone from wandering off with everyones things now to always trying to trade his possesions ( yes he's learned the concept of personal property thank god) for new ones and then promptly trading them again for new things ( This is the serious start of Tobias' hobby of collecting things. He doesn't hoard things he just likes to have little collections of different things, when the collections get boring he'll trade them for new ones i.e Stamps for Pogs then Pogs for marbles etc.)

This stage is when Tobias begins to recreate his energy reservoir as his previous one was destroyed when he died. Through reading and using what he learned from the past he will slowly gather the skills to harness the power to control the dead. This will be a slow process and his strength is rather minute. For Tobias this is keyed to his memories of using his skills with Lex as well as curiosity.


Of course this re interest in necromancy is not met with acceptance from his guardian who refuses to help him understand texts that he can't read believing him far too young to fully comprehend what he's getting into.

This leads to an obstinate Tobias who' becomes fixated on death and necromancy despite his inability to full understand the concepts they represent. when he pieces things together he gets a bit egotistical at being able to do it despite not having help.



Tobias is still not a fan of conflict, understanding a bit better how fragile life can be he prefers to avoid physical fights at all costs. Infact he becomes just a bit too reliant on lex to solve any problems that have the slightest chance of him getting hurt.


Teen: Tobias goes through insane mood swings at this age switching from being very clingy with friends and family ( his link to life) to shunning them ( As he tries to embrace the inevitable and learn to deal with it) within a matter of hours. This is a time of soul searching for him and when he has to make his hardest choices.

Lex is perhaps is greatest friend and worse enemy at this time, the reliance he placed on him as a child has grown greatly and he's prone to leaving decisions up to Lex. However being a nitemare and very old does not make Lex capable of doing these things well. He has only the intelligence and skills he had as a warhorse before he died. When making decsions he is actually taking clues from Tobias as to what he subconsciously wants to do ala the clever Hans theory.

Tobias is not quite stable at this point in his life and it will take time and help from those who consider him a friend to bring him back to a point where he can see the world and his role in it again.

once this is accomplished he will find a part time job to learn responsibility and independence as well as to expand his dwindling social skills. Tobias then takes his collecting hobby to a new level as he finally settles down with a few collections and gets serious about buying interesting and worthwhile pieces for all of them.

Youth: Following in the path of his guardian Tobias has taken to the study of Genealogy. His time is now dived into studying with his guardian, working on his necromancy and working so he can become independent. What free time can be found in his schedule is spent with Lex or any friends he may still have at this point.

He has become less co-dependant on Lex although he still feels a great connection to him.



Adult: Tobias has no set adult personality as due to his transformation being complete now and dealing with new changes and challenges his personality will fluctuate wildly for a good deal of adulthood before settling down.


Physical description From Wand-Adult


Wand: Tobias' wand is made of bleach white bone ( of unknown origin ^-^) resembling a human arm so much that it even ends with what looks to be a hand curled into a fist.

Babyghost: As baby ghost Tobias is a dark red baby shaped mass of mist.

Baby:
Tobias looks like he swallowed an entire butterball turkey at this age. He's all baby fat and healthy tan skin. His copper hair is currently curly and clings tight to his head. His eyes are a normal looking bright blue. he ha a small amount of light freckles across the bridge of his nose and hands. Clothing wise his guardian would put him in something like this http://www.googoogear.com.au/baby_clothes/william.jpg minus the hat.

Toddler: While he's a bit slimmer Tobias still has some of his baby fat . His curls have loosened a little and his hair is slightly longer. His freckles have darkened and are much more visable though no new ones have appeared. Clothing wise his guardian will have him in something like this. http://media.musictoday.com/store/bands/322/product_medium/GMCM04.jpg

Kid: Finally Tobias has lost all his baby fat and looks like your average young boy who's a bit short for his age. His skin however appears to have paled mysteriously after emerging from his growth quest. His hair has gone short except for a small bit that is the beginning of a side rattail . Like this http://www.clicket.com/images/1704.jpg. Tobias is at this age allowed to pick his own clothing and being rather uninterested in what he wears settles for several sets of track suits. ( Which is amusing since exercise is not high on his list of things to do)

Teenager: Growth spurt time, Tobias shot up quiet a bit after his latest quest. He's now around 5'8 and pretty thin. Being more a of studier than an exceriser Tobias has very little muscle on him and he's unlikely to win so much as a game of arm wrestling. His skin has paled again and seems slightly withered and yellowish. His eyes now have red flecks in them. His hair is still short except for the side braided rat tail that reaches his waist.

In order to hide his deteriorating conditon* ( as he now knows he will eventually look like a skeleton) Tobias has taken to wearing hooded robes most of the time. The rest of the time he returns to his childhood habit of wearing track suits as they are long sleeved and legged.
* Every week at this point Tobias's body gets worse and worse moving from human looks to that of a Lich.


Youth: At this point Tobias is barely hanging on to life. His skin is yellowed completely and clings tight to his bones while his eyes have sunk into his head and are now a dull lifeless red. His rattail is gone and now Tobias is left with a thin layer of hair reminiscent of baby fuzz covering his head.
To cover his nearly skeletal body Tobias has adopted the old clothing he wore in his past life at this age . ( reference material to come).

Adult:
Tobias is merely a skeleton now with eyes made of red fire. Tobias has adopted the old clothing he wore in his past life at this point in his unlife . ( reference material to come).


Distinctive Marks:
freckles on the bridge of his nose and hands.
Likes: Lex, T.V, Rock and roll, unnatural looking things and street magic.
Dislikes: Bread, scented candles, having to dress up, shedules.
Hobbies: Riding Lexington, discovering new types of magic, Drawing and collecting things.

Extra information: The title to this quest has a double meaning. First Tobias will die again to become a Lich and secondly well he may not actually make it that far. For Tobias the shock of his past and his future may be too much to handle. There is hope however that with the aid of friends he can hold tight to life but only time will tell if he will make it past teen stage.

ladyumbra


ladyumbra

PostPosted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 6:27 pm


Guardian and home information. *under construction*

Name: Jeanette Fraser
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Occupation: Genealogist
Charges: None
Hair Colour: Coppery red
Eye Colour: hazel
Distinctive Marks: Freckles running across the bridge of her nose and liberally sprinkled on her hands.

General likes: History, educational t.v, reading and traveling.
General dislikes: being called Jean or Jeannie, uncooperative people, badly kept records and music with lyrics that make no sense.
Hobbies:putting together puzzles and trivia games.

Personality:
PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 10:47 am


As far as I can tell, no rules are being broken =)

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ladyumbra

PostPosted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 7:22 pm


looking for concrit now.
PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 9:02 pm


Done some major changing in personality and power explanations and finally got the basics of the guardian info up.

ladyumbra


ladyumbra

PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 8:43 pm


Roka_Shotar
I'd like to start off by saying that the highlight of Tobias seems to be his personality. You have gone into great detail about it, which is a true pleasure. Now onto a little more detail.

Important Facts about Tobias
I noticed how you did not specify when some of the powers would be obtained. I think that it is an essential part of the child, as it would help enrich his personality better. Would the baby stage hear the cries of the long-dead, or is that the kid stage? Clarity in this aspect would be much appreciated.

Other than that, I like how you made the powers dependent on outside rituals. It is a refreshing concept.

I have an idea for the paralyzing/painful touch; to do so, Tobias has to "charge" his energy into the touch. If it is not dispensed soon on a living target, the energy rebounds and either paralyzes or wracks pain in Tobias. This uses up a small amount of the life energy as well as makes the weapon seem more risky.

Past
I am hoping that you can write this in the form of a narrative. I think it would be both more helpful in expressing your literary skills and more entertaining to read. We all love a good story, and the time line is nice. It would be a better accent to a narrative than it being the entire history.

Present
I am a little confused about Lex. What is he? And if you are going to play him, which would make Tobias focus on him, wouldn't that be hard to RP? You would just play with yourself instead of others, which would seem counter-intuitive for a large-group RP. I might suggest either removing Lex all together or not make him Tobias's main friend.

I also think you could go into greater detail with his appearance. It seems bland and short compared to the level of detail you offered up for the personality. I suggest going into height, maybe eye colors, or even describe his clothing alongside the images.

Conclusion
A good start on a potentially great breedable! Keep up the work, do not be afraid of detail, and be vigilant.

- Roka_Shotar


oh thanks I'll take this into consideration.
for clarification lex is a nightmare an undead warhorse that Tobias raised in his past life. He is important and he will feature a lot in the story because it's part of Tobias' personality to become Dependant on him. However he will still have other friends and socialize. it's sort of like how all d-corp children have a dragon that hatches at thier preteen stage and becomes ancessory to their story and a big part of their lives.

I'll get on your crit right away.
PostPosted: Fri May 04, 2007 1:33 am


Added more power clarification and began turning the past from a point form timeline to a narrative.

ladyumbra


einiez

PostPosted: Fri May 04, 2007 1:00 pm


I read through, and I am very interested. However, there is something I would probably like to see expanded The traits at likes, dislikes and hobbies. I know you go into his personality a little bit before that, but seeing those qualities just listed out makes me want to ask questions. Such as, why bread? why scented candles specifically? What happened? Specific scents he likes? Drawing what? You know? It leads to a lot more questions, which is both good (creates interest) and bad (frustration, a little bit.)


I guess this might also be because I just want to know more. I haven't read through many of the other quests, so maybe this is the specific style it's supposed to be.

[more added later]
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