My friend has an account on deviantART and I helped with a couple of stories. Since we both want to know what people think of them, I'm posting about them here. Scroll down to the recent deviations. They're the two new boxes of text, 'The Piano' and 'If Only'.
The LC in the title means light critique, you can comment on it if you want and it's potentially helpful, but we're pretty much finished with the stories and won't be changing them any time soon. If you want to you can, if not, sit back and enjoy!
Let me know what you think!
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The Roleplay Refuge
A welcome and friendly place where many Role Plays are encouraged