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 Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 12:41 pm
I was recently invited to join this guild and I'm not completely sure about everything. I was hoping to try myself with a battle..just not anyone whose too experienced. Perhaps this can serve as a practice/off the record battle, please?
Feel free to make the rules as you see fit.
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 1:30 pm
Hey I'll accept. Rules are 8barsmax no min mrgreen . No feeding biting etc.
You choose who goes first.
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 1:33 pm
Zone2nigguh Hey I'll accept. Rules are 8barsmax no min mrgreen . No feeding biting etc. You choose who goes first. Sounds fair enough, thank you for accepting. I'd appreciate it if you'd go first.
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 1:50 pm
Ok no problem.
This battle is just like a movie/
I'm the underdog so theres no way I can lose G/
Like a horror flick the weakest dies first, to this battle the same applies/
Just call me the Texas Chainsaw Massacre and your the weakest link goodbye/
Or I'll leave you kickin and screamin like an asian thriller/
In this event you can be Yao Ming, because I just popped 3 over you like Reggie Miller/
Hello Hello can you hear me now I think you got bad reception/
Trust me after this verse you're going to be late for your wedding/
Call me Queen Elizabeth because I got one bar thats more deadly than a beheading/
The exicutioner exicuting my rhymes like a pro and don't forget it/
You cant match my rhymes because ya brain is smaller than a peanut/
I won thats a wrap of Act 1 Scene 3 CUT/
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 3:58 pm
Honestly, not much on your part was expected,
Your words are worthless statements written like when a black man is arrested
These rhymes of mine will shock you and rattle your brain,
Punchlines causing more throbbing temples than a migraine
"Incapable and disabled" is your physical discription
after I've chained you in an a** pounding, Doggy style position
Nasty a** homosexuals like your type put internet sluts to shame
with the age old request, you beg, "Please, c** on my face!"
No point in continuing to shatter a broken man,
Death to the gag whore titled the "Choking Man"
Eh..since this is my first battle I tried to put as little effort as possible into it, basically to match your verse.
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 4:24 pm
Act 1 Scene 3 Honestly, not much on your part was expected, Your words are worthless statements written like when a black man is arrested These rhymes of mine will shock you and rattle your brain, Punchlines causing more throbbing temples than a migraine "Incapable and disabled" is your physical discription after I've chained you in an a** pounding, Doggy style position Nasty a** homosexuals like your type put internet sluts to shame with the age old request, you beg, "Please, c** on my face!" No point in continuing to shatter a broken man, Death to the gag whore titled the "Choking Man" Eh..since this is my first battle I tried to put as little effort as possible into it, basically to match your verse. It was alright, I was suprised. It didn't flow all so well.
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 4:26 pm
O.G. Kz Act 1 Scene 3 Honestly, not much on your part was expected, Your words are worthless statements written like when a black man is arrested These rhymes of mine will shock you and rattle your brain, Punchlines causing more throbbing temples than a migraine "Incapable and disabled" is your physical discription after I've chained you in an a** pounding, Doggy style position Nasty a** homosexuals like your type put internet sluts to shame with the age old request, you beg, "Please, c** on my face!" No point in continuing to shatter a broken man, Death to the gag whore titled the "Choking Man" Eh..since this is my first battle I tried to put as little effort as possible into it, basically to match your verse. It was alright, I was suprised. It didn't flow all so well. I know..but I didn't feel as if it had to have too much substance.. Anyway, vote?
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 4:29 pm
Act 1 Scene 3 Honestly, not much on your part was expected,
Your words are worthless statements written like when a black man is arrested
These rhymes of mine will shock you and rattle your brain,
Punchlines causing more throbbing temples than a migraine
"Incapable and disabled" is your physical discription
after I've chained you in an a** pounding, Doggy style positionNasty a** homosexuals like your type put internet sluts to shame with the age old request, you beg, "Please, c** on my face!" No point in continuing to shatter a broken man, Death to the gag whore titled the "Choking Man" Eh..since this is my first battle I tried to put as little effort as possible into it, basically to match your verse. It was all good until those last 2 bars. It was hard but I think Act one this one. Even though the first one was kind of offensive, it was so true. Vote: Act 1 Scene 3
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 4:40 pm
There was a little too many homo lines in your verse act 1. Zone2's was a little more clean cut flow was equal but those homo lines shunned me from that verse so ima have to say Zone2
VOTE: ZONE2
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 5:07 pm
Hm..looks like it's one a piece.
I find that his first two bars were pretty much meant to be introduction, because they weren't punchlines...
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