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 Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 1:37 am
This is my first ever fanfic. I know its based more on Torchwood, the Doctor Who but I wanted to see what you guys think. I only wrote it in two lunch times and a morning and timelady was there annoying me every step of the way. I dont think I could have done it without her. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3193251/1/anyway, i know its crap but i think it was alright for someone who has never done a fanfic before.
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Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 10:19 am
That was a pretty interesting beginning. Delta's a wonderful idea (though I hate her nickname... Dell computers suck...)
Yeah, I always wondered what happened to the Doctor's hand...
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Hairy Priest Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 15, 2006 3:07 am
my dad just bought a Dell computer a few weeks ago. i was staring at the logo when the idea for this story came into my head. i was also listening to a Delta Goodram song so that explains the name anyway.
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Posted: Sun Oct 15, 2006 7:07 am
thats a great story! Are you going to write any more?
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Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 3:22 am
im working on the next chapter at the moment. i dont know when i will post it. it needs to be cut down a little and im getting one of my friends to read over it tomorrow. (not timelady. she's on camp) so if you liked this, keep a look out for the next part.
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Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 10:56 pm
Next Chapters Posted. hope you like it. the writing style is a little different and this chapter has more action then the first. and there are some new characters. anyway, enjoy.
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 9:58 am
Well, if you named her Dell because you were looking at the logo on the new computer, does that mean you named the aliens Gyros because you were snacking on one while writing chapter 2?
Anyway, it was another good chapter. Nice to see the Harriet Jones, even if she was a big meanie for calling in the army. Maybe she's still bitter that Ten conspired to bring down her administration, and so now she's taking it out on his hand?
I'm surprised she didn't run around telling everyone "Hello, I'm Harriet Jones, Representative of All the Earth!" xd
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Posted: Sat Oct 21, 2006 2:56 pm
Hairy Priest Well, if you named her Dell because you were looking at the logo on the new computer, does that mean you named the aliens Gyros because you were snacking on one while writing chapter 2? Anyway, it was another good chapter. Nice to see the Harriet Jones, even if she was a big meanie for calling in the army. Maybe she's still bitter that Ten conspired to bring down her administration, and so now she's taking it out on his hand? I'm surprised she didn't run around telling everyone "Hello, I'm Harriet Jones, Representative of All the Earth!" xd i never thought of her saying that. its a good idea. thanks. i have no idea what a gyros is, my friend thought it up when i was trying to think of a name and it was easy so i used it. the next chapter is finished and will be posted soon but i have to get my co-writer to read over it first. the only detail im giving away is that the doctor makes an appearence in it.
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