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 Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 1:32 pm
Removed DX Because a writer said I could lose it!! and some one else could copy write it and then there we go it's gone some one else's story which would be horrible and bad because they don't and wouldn't know my characters the way I do DX
No offense to you guys. but I don't want to lose my story Y_Y the thought terrifies me.
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Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 5:16 pm
This is good. biggrin I already read the 1st part in your journal, but now I get to read more! It's definitely getting interesting; I want to know more. Can't wait for more! (yes I'm redundant xp )
There were some gramatical errors: some missing commas, maybe a typo here or there. I'm not great with grammar stuff, so I'm really not the best person to advise on this part. Ok, good job. smile
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Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 5:18 pm
...still reading. still loving heart
This is really different, but I LIKE this character. He's klinda Kirby-ish, ya know?
well, you wouldn't would ya? No one really knows me here... ninja right?
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riiiiiiiight....?
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Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 5:41 pm
lol No I don't know you very well Kirby ^_^ but I'm glad you both like it... If you look at the letter written from vivian.. oh if you could only see what I have written on my paper... *looks at it* I wish there was a way I could have deleted the lines for the T's and the dots from some I's... yah know... wait a minute... I might make it an image... yeah and then I can do that O.o but then what if you can't read that... >.> ... descisions descisions... I'm a rather bad speller... allways have been my mother says I get it from my aunt... and then I look at my dads writing and go... "No mother... I get it from right here" stressed
Either way if you do catch where I've made a mistake typo or otherwise I'd love to know so that I may fix it 3nodding and learn to either type with the light on >.o or remember to hit that dang comma...
Oh gosh how could I almost forget! Thank you! Thanks for reading and thanks for commenting! heart
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