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 Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 7:19 pm
My love,
As I sit here in the dawns early light
Writeing this poem for my one earths delight
I struggle and struggle to find the words
But none come to my half empty skull
Then i figure, Or past or Present or Future
Remember the past and the blood left behind
My knuckles still dirty from the violence behind
Our love is all that binds
The present the Present my mind comes out
the present holds but darkness and depths
for this horrible crime you have commit
Or love and trust you have shattered
More blood be shed my rage did hunger
But enough about or sad lonely present
Perhapes the future holds something plesent
But atlast there is no future, for it has not comb under this cloudly weather
In the past present or future, my love stays true My heart is yours, do with it as you will
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Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 5:23 pm
nice poem it actualy really good im a song riter so ya so how did you come up whit that
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Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 7:51 pm
I was looking at pictures of my first true love i ever had, and well it touched the poem inside of me...If you actuely read the poem and think alittle you can basicly tell how or relationship went
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Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 4:16 pm
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 6:35 am
sweatdrop its only a rough draft...when ever my new girlfriend gets off my lap i plan to do some work on it
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Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2006 5:46 pm
Scipii_Triarii sweatdrop its only a rough draft...when ever my new girlfriend gets off my lap i plan to do some work on it XD
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Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2006 10:22 pm
hyper_gal741 Scipii_Triarii sweatdrop its only a rough draft...when ever my new girlfriend gets off my lap i plan to do some work on it XD Im serios, i will be like sitting at my computer and she like sneaks into my house and all of a sudden she is clinging to me and i can barely move >.< i guess i have a comfy lap or some s**t
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 5:08 pm
That's funny. By the way I liked the poem.
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 11:04 pm
That was a great poem. 3nodding
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