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 Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 8:32 am
Maleficent Chaos Honestly, jceaz...no. Ras seriously here, that was weak. Personals wern't even personal, they were just....there. Not like they were strong, or put anything behind the verse. And all you really had were personals, and your finisher was a dud. Teezy, better than Ras, but not by much. You had personals, a lil better than what Ras had in his. And overall you just had better punches throughout than Ras did, but as well...your finisher was a dud. I gotta go with Teezy on this one, its plain and simple to me reading the verses. yeah.. I'm tryna work on my finishers.. but I told yall I just threw this together so we can have a complete battle guys jeez... rolleyes
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 9:57 am
C Teezy Maleficent Chaos Honestly, jceaz...no. Ras seriously here, that was weak. Personals wern't even personal, they were just....there. Not like they were strong, or put anything behind the verse. And all you really had were personals, and your finisher was a dud. Teezy, better than Ras, but not by much. You had personals, a lil better than what Ras had in his. And overall you just had better punches throughout than Ras did, but as well...your finisher was a dud. I gotta go with Teezy on this one, its plain and simple to me reading the verses. yeah.. I'm tryna work on my finishers.. but I told yall I just threw this together so we can have a complete battle guys jeez... rolleyes Its all good man, I figured I'd point out some areas though that you could improve on, just tryin' to help with what I can. Mind you I might be an a*****e, but I do know what I'm talking about...even though most people seem to want to say I don't.
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 11:11 am
As soon as Teezy makes his verse look nice and pretty, he gets a vote. This place is nuts! Bolding should be banned! Ban the Bold!
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 11:15 am
Raskit As soon as Teezy makes his verse look nice and pretty, he gets a vote. This place is nuts! Bolding should be banned! Ban the Bold! Ok for one, quit bitching. Two, I don't pay attention to bolding, italizising, underlining, striking through, none of it. I don't give a ******** what he adds to it, its the lyrical content that had me vote for him. *hands Ras a tissue* here you go.
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 12:35 pm
Raskit As soon as Teezy makes his verse look nice and pretty, he gets a vote. This place is nuts! Bolding should be banned! Ban the Bold! You ever noticed that anytime I don't bold and stuff, people say I didn't come hard...? That's why I'm starting to wonder what these people is really voting for...
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 1:31 pm
Raskit took this battle. All that bolding and stuff just made me realize that your verse was made for slow people.Like me. That made me realize your verse was kind of simple. Raskit he came hard with good wordplay and punches.
VOTE: RASKIT
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 1:32 pm
C Teezy Raskit As soon as Teezy makes his verse look nice and pretty, he gets a vote. This place is nuts! Bolding should be banned! Ban the Bold! You ever noticed that anytime I don't bold and stuff, people say I didn't come hard...? That's why I'm starting to wonder what these people is really voting for... Right, I'm gonna bold my lyric. People vote for how pretty it looks.
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 2:58 pm
Raskit C Teezy Raskit As soon as Teezy makes his verse look nice and pretty, he gets a vote. This place is nuts! Bolding should be banned! Ban the Bold! You ever noticed that anytime I don't bold and stuff, people say I didn't come hard...? That's why I'm starting to wonder what these people is really voting for... Right, I'm gonna bold my lyric. People vote for how pretty it looks. i personally think bolding is a why to make weak lines look like superior punches and makes everybody go OOH! but if you actually pay attention to what the person is saying you'll see its just a simple punch
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 3:16 pm
Durrtyboi Raskit C Teezy Raskit As soon as Teezy makes his verse look nice and pretty, he gets a vote. This place is nuts! Bolding should be banned! Ban the Bold! You ever noticed that anytime I don't bold and stuff, people say I didn't come hard...? That's why I'm starting to wonder what these people is really voting for... Right, I'm gonna bold my lyric. People vote for how pretty it looks. i personally think bolding is a why to make weak lines look like superior punches and makes everybody go OOH! but if you actually pay attention to what the person is saying you'll see its just a simple punch boldin helps you see what I'm tryna get at... that was the only reason.. with the setup I used in this one.. bolding.. rhymes.. italics and underlining... wordplay, puns, etc...
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 3:19 pm
Raskit Who left this fool in charge of a whole damn guild?He'll delete this thread so people can't see him being killed that bar gave me cardiac arrest! crying
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Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2006 8:12 am
C Teezy Raskit Who left this fool in charge of a whole damn guild?He'll delete this thread so people can't see him being killed that bar gave me cardiac arrest! crying
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