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 Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 8:20 am
I'm Riverawulf and this is pretty brand new to me. I'm totally open to constructive criticism and if you're feeling generous, a nice comment smile This is work is completely hand done with pencil, pen, and color pencils. You see I just don't get CG art... haha well hope you guys and gals like it! 
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 8:50 am
I really like the hair 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Sep 26, 2006 1:55 pm
Well done, but the pants confuse me. Why so patchy? Why unbuttoned and unzipped? The pants don't seem to fit with the rest of what I see. The other thing is, what is that in her hand? It looks like a collar.
Specific good things I see:
*Clean lines
*Cleans color shift in the hair
*Folds and strech in the clothes
*Face and anatomy
*Hair
*Pose, face and hair work together to set the mood
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Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 11:32 pm
Her legs seem very skinny to me, but your linework is wonderful.
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Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2006 10:56 pm
i can't get the hang of pencils, but im glad you can. one thing that could be cool is having more variety in shadow. it'll make it look more rich, and maybe a direction of light. it'll just make it look more interesting, but it's very smooth, and the colours are great.
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Posted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 8:47 pm
I love the hair, and the design on her shirt looks really nice. Her legs are a bit skinny and her left arm looks a tad small. But besides that, this is a very nice drawing. smile
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Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2006 11:11 am
nice coloring. great job. smile
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Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2006 6:59 pm
excelent job on the top part, but the pants are a little off, they need a bit of tweaking. but over all, good job.
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Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 6:40 am
Hooray for traditional media!
Great job on the hair and the hat! They almost look CG.
Also, great work on the hand. That's a very difficult angle to draw one at (...which I still haven't mastered, but you have it down!).
Bravissimo!
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