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 Posted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 5:19 pm
So, I went camping with my family and some friends a few weeks back. While there, I got bored, and stole my friends sketchbook to doodle in it (even though I had my own. gonk ). Next thing I know I'm drawing my OC, Rayne, and it's the best I've ever drawn her. I was mad, lol. But my friend ripped it out of her sketchbook a few days later after school and gave it to me. So I completed it, and scanned it in. Give me some advice/crits please! (I know her face sucks, be gentle!) http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a67/foresakensoul66/Rayne.pnga URL because it is rather large.
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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 9:19 am
I won't say anything about the face, but the left foot seems a bit awkward.
(I just wanna poke it! ^^)
Her hand looks a bit small for her body.
Her shoulders could use a tiny bit wider.
I hoped that helped. sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 2:46 pm
Super Glue Hero I won't say anything about the face, but the left foot seems a bit awkward.
(I just wanna poke it! ^^)
Her hand looks a bit small for her body.
Her shoulders could use a tiny bit wider.
I hoped that helped. sweatdrop Yeah, that helps. xD Feet and hands (non clenched, lol) are my major downfall, and I never know how to draw the foot right in 3/4 pose. Know of any good references? I see what you mean about the hand, I was wondering about that. Wider? Really? Hmmm....
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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 5:08 pm
unseen_talents26 Yeah, that helps. xD Feet and hands (non clenched, lol) are my major downfall, and I never know how to draw the foot right in 3/4 pose. Know of any good references? I see what you mean about the hand, I was wondering about that. Wider? Really? Hmmm....
Well, if you have a digi cam, have a friend or someone in your family takes pictures of you in the pose from the angle you want it in.
I don't have a digi cam, so, I mostly go by imagination. xD
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 7:07 pm
her face could use a little touch up
and what the guy said before.
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 9:26 pm
freiflug her face could use a little touch up and what the guy said before. unseen_talents26 (I know her face sucks, be gentle!) Like I said. I plan to go back and retouch that, I was mainly looking for help on her body. @Super Glue Hero: Yeah, I always forget to get someone to take a picture of me, and not to mention, when I try to, I never get the angle right. gonk
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Posted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 8:36 am
There's a girl at my school who calls herself that. Rayne. And it's not even her real name. Tylerians are so odd. : D
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Posted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 1:51 pm
unseen_talents26 freiflug her face could use a little touch up and what the guy said before. unseen_talents26 (I know her face sucks, be gentle!) Like I said. I plan to go back and retouch that, I was mainly looking for help on her body. @Super Glue Hero: Yeah, I always forget to get someone to take a picture of me, and not to mention, when I try to, I never get the angle right. gonk
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Posted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 3:04 pm
sybex Shark unseen_talents26 freiflug her face could use a little touch up and what the guy said before. unseen_talents26 (I know her face sucks, be gentle!) Like I said. I plan to go back and retouch that, I was mainly looking for help on her body. @Super Glue Hero: Yeah, I always forget to get someone to take a picture of me, and not to mention, when I try to, I never get the angle right. gonk Ooh, yeah.... let's just hope my friends are willing, xD (they aren't exactly known for helping me with poses. ><) and I have no money, so I can't get a book.... I can't even buy chips, lol. @Ranmizu: I go by Rayne at school sometimes. My friend and I call each other by our OC names... perhaps we attend the same school! lol, jk. Oh, and... What's a tylerian?
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