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 Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 9:24 am
 Bunny LoveI thought I'd post this work in progress here. I need input. Is her color okay? I wanted her to be white but she came out like this. Do you see any anatomy problems? Do you have any suggestions for a background/setting? I want this to be more elaborate and detailed but it is just plain now. He is gonna be a tan/brown color. This is supposed to represent Jason and I. My creativity is lacking though. I want it to have more going on. I think I'm gonna add our cat Hush somehow. Ideas? Thanks.
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Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 5:41 pm
Wow, I thought I'd get a response sooner here...
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Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 6:08 pm
you did!
well, i like how they're both outlined in different coloured. but i'd like to know what you're going for before i can give you in depth advice. ex., if this is a beginning, would you like colour ideas? fill me in.
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Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 7:24 pm
Well, at this point I really want help with the anatomy. The brown (male) bunny's face is giving me hell. He should be looking down at her. As well as the hands. They should be paw-like in shape. The female has no claws. Um, The other bunny will be white (female) and I'm going to use an off blue-grey color to shade her. She will have green eyes, his will be a dark brownish grey. That is a tattoo on her chest. Hrm. What else... I am going for a realistic-anthro look.
This is supposed to be the anthro bunny version of my fiancee and I, by the way. wink
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Posted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 7:23 pm
that sounds cool.
well, as you're basing it off real people, taking a pic of you and your fiance in the same pose can help. as you're having trouble with the face, i suggest getting a reference pic of both your fiance and a bunny, so you can make a blend of both of them.
as for the hand, at this point, it doesn't exactly look like they're holding hands. placing it lower so that the other fingers are showing can make the sense that they are grabbing eachother.
remind me if i missedd anything. i'm glad to help.
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Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 7:54 pm
Post updated. I didn't know if I should update this one or make a new one... :/
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Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2006 7:16 am
The coloring on her fur and in her eye is amazing. The only thing that bothers me is her ear. Her lop ear looks odd with the curl on the end of the crease at the top. Also, the handsdon't look correct.
Love the coloring! Keep working on it it's a great start.
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Posted: Mon Oct 23, 2006 11:12 pm
I agree about the hands. you should be able to see the female's other hand, and her had that is showing has fingers that look rather odd. ^^ See if you can find a reference for the hands.
And the male's other had would most likely be around her waist, if they're standing together like that.
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Posted: Thu Oct 26, 2006 9:08 am
I think it looks great so far. I cannot wait to see the finished version heart
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 2:00 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 8:49 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2007 2:41 pm
Great work on the coloring, very nice!
I only see two problems with the female bunny just by looking at it. Her right hand (the one on his neck/shoulder) is a little strange. You should round out the fingers a little more, like she actually has it placed on his neck rather than holding a piece of paper.
Her breast is also rather pointed, and their stance seems like she's pressed up against him. This would make the breast flat again him and bulge a bit at the sides.
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Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 7:50 pm
I dunno if it is supposed to be like this but the bottom half of her body from just under the arms downward seems to get too thick/big for what would match the top. I guess i mean the butt and torso is too big for the bust upwards.
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2007 3:42 pm
Update with a newer version crying
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Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 11:28 pm
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