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 Posted: Sun Sep 17, 2006 10:14 am
Here's a poem I wrote, Not too long ago. I hope you like it, And if you could please give me your ideas and comments on it then I'd love you forever.
I thought I had no life.
Sitting on my bed with the knife.
Remembering the gun near my head.
Why was the gun near my head?
Was it something I did?
Was it something I said?
Remembering now..
Now Im dead..
This poem's about a girl, Suffering from a Dramatic past, and she kill's herself over it. It's a lil dark and pretty short. But yeah..
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Posted: Sun Sep 17, 2006 10:15 am
It would be cool if you guy's could share your poems also. ^^
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Posted: Tue May 15, 2007 9:49 am
here's one of mine;
The Stage
With the lampposts for lighting
And there is no script
Its real not stage fighting
And reality has slipped
The actors are among us
No person if left out
With the streets for a stage
In happiness or rage
Yes the world is a stage
And west-end if life
hope you like it!
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