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Preventer Void Vice Captain
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 Posted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 11:50 pm
Just making a little topic here, probably for future use.
As pessimistic as it sounds, I'm really not getting any help from my friends in regards to my fanfics (or, well, anything creative I try), so I'm a bit frustrated at the moment. However, I'd like to think that you guys could offer some good old-fashioned C&C.
For starters, here's my stuff:
www.fanfiction.net/~preventervoid
It would be greatly appreciated if I could get some comments on Codename Lightning; as it is, the only person who helps me is my GF, and she seems to like every idea I pitch, so I'm hoping for maybe a more critical perspective. If all goes well, I may run ideas for the next chapter by y'all.
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Posted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 1:44 pm
I might read it, I might not. If I do I don't really know how to comment since I'm not a member.
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Preventer Void Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 4:17 pm
Comments can be made here.
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Posted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 5:36 am
alright, I'll see if I can find time to read them biggrin
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Posted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 7:31 am
yaay am going to check out your story's , i have a Fanfic.net account as well but i hardly post any fanfic becaue i have been very busy plus i seem to get writers block gonk i check it out when i have time 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 12:49 pm
Hey,
I'm no big writter so you'll have to take what I say with a pinch of salt. I havent wrote many myself and they are all 1x2 fanfics. But never the less here is my review on Codename : Lightning
Well I’ve only read the first chapter and I love it already.
I’m not a big 1xR fan. Yeah sure I’ll read it and now and then enjoy it but my hearts mainly only interested in 2x1. But I have to say I am quite enjoying this, and I’m only on the first chapter.
Its very descriptive at the beginning and sticks to the personalities of the characters quite well. It does radiate the whole upbeat and hopefulness and everything isn’t lost quite from the beginning.
I loved how Relena reacted to the news of Clair it was touching and even though I’m not the biggest fan makes you sympathise with her and almost makes you want to grab Heero and force him to love her.
Its factual points on it makes it realistic and not fantasy or exaggerated creating a likness.
Fairly funny and at some points actually had me chuckling out loud.
The spelling here and there was a little out but I can't expect you to be perfect now.
I truly enjoyed that and wish I had half as much talent as you do.
Thanks for asking as I will continue to read on and enjoy
Best of luck for future fanficks
Lillika
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