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  Blue, duh!
  Aquamraine. Blue is far too simple.
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SharPhoe
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 9:08 pm


I decided to make up this thread,
For the folks who like using their head.
If you think you're a poet,
and you just wanna show it,
Then why don't you post here instead?


Have fun!
PostPosted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 10:32 pm


Smile

A single smile,
I havent had that in a while,
Being with you is such a joyful thing,
It makes my heart sing.
Everytime I think of you,
My heart jumps and there's a smile upon my face.
That is a special case.

You are a beautiful surprise to me.
You are the only person I want to see.
A single simple smile will always be there on my face as long as I see you, you can never be replaced.

Never ever change your beautiful smile.
Your smile makes my heart run so many miles.
I love you and dont ever change,
Stay the same as you are,
Because you will always be my star.

Paine_Lovely128
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SharPhoe
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 8:29 pm


Very deep, Paine! I usually don't go for stuff that long, I'm no good in the long run. When it comes to short stuff, though, I'm pretty good.

On the day that this old guild was made,
people poured in just like a cascade!
But now it's died down,
but don't you dare frown,
'cause I brought us all lemonade!
blaugh
PostPosted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 9:16 pm


SharinganPhoenix
Very deep, Paine! I usually don't go for stuff that long, I'm no good in the long run. When it comes to short stuff, though, I'm pretty good.

On the day that this old guild was made,
people poured in just like a cascade!
But now it's died down,
but don't you dare frown,
'cause I brought us all lemonade!
blaugh



lol, nice one! I have to make up another one, when I do, I'll post one up here!

Paine_Lovely128
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SharPhoe
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 9:34 pm


Gah. I'm drawing a blank right now. School is doing this to me, I know it! gonk
PostPosted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 4:16 pm


School is getting to me too.... blaugh

Paine_Lovely128
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IMTyrannic

PostPosted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 9:01 pm


okay...i'm not good at poems...i'm not a poet, but my ex inspired me to write one....i'm open for criticism, but go easy on me, kay?

Dove


To my dearest;
the one I love.
To you, I'm nearest...
My most beautiful dove.

With un-relenting care,
i show you who I am.
A heart as big a bear's,
as sheepish as a lamb.

You're the one that's been there for me...
Making sure i'm well.
waiting on my hand and knee,
But always laughing when i fell!

You've shown me how to be a person...
You've shown me how to function...
I know know that you are the very sun!
But what can be done for my own redemption?

I have too much love to let go.
I don't want you to say "No...";

I always think of you're feelings.
And i always think of you're thoughts.

The memories we share will last forever...
I just want to be with you.
please don't say, "Never!"
All i can do is stay true...

I give you all my loyalty...
I give you all my faith...
i give you all my love...
And i show you no hate...

I love you Veronica Krysta Vega.
You're my one and only love...
my one and only dove.


That's my first poem i've ever written...it makes me sad every time i read it...i dunno...maybe it's good. does anybody like it?
PostPosted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 6:23 am


Lu Xihan
okay...i'm not good at poems...i'm not a poet, but my ex inspired me to write one....i'm open for criticism, but go easy on me, kay?

Dove


To my dearest;
the one I love.
To you, I'm nearest...
My most beautiful dove.

With un-relenting care,
i show you who I am.
A heart as big a bear's,
as sheepish as a lamb.

You're the one that's been there for me...
Making sure i'm well.
waiting on my hand and knee,
But always laughing when i fell!

You've shown me how to be a person...
You've shown me how to function...
I know know that you are the very sun!
But what can be done for my own redemption?

I have too much love to let go.
I don't want you to say "No...";

I always think of you're feelings.
And i always think of you're thoughts.

The memories we share will last forever...
I just want to be with you.
please don't say, "Never!"
All i can do is stay true...

I give you all my loyalty...
I give you all my faith...
i give you all my love...
And i show you no hate...

I love you Veronica Krysta Vega.
You're my one and only love...
my one and only dove.


That's my first poem i've ever written...it makes me sad every time i read it...i dunno...maybe it's good. does anybody like it?

It's beautiful!

Coeurlregina


Ange Rebelle
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 9:36 am


Lu Xihan

That's my first poem i've ever written...it makes me sad every time i read it...i dunno...maybe it's good. does anybody like it?


I like it... 3nodding ... it makes me think about Matt, lol... I don't write poems, but... he wrote some poems for me... *loves them*... heart
PostPosted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 7:03 pm


thanks you two! *cries* i miss her though...i wrote the poem for her on our one year anniversary last month.

IMTyrannic


Ange Rebelle
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 1:13 am


Aww, but... why'd you break up? I hate it when people do that... sad ... makes me sad too... sweatdrop
PostPosted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 2:32 pm


eh...it's a very long nd hard story to tell...i'd rather PM it to ya...

IMTyrannic


Paine_Lovely128
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 8:47 am


Lu Xihan
okay...i'm not good at poems...i'm not a poet, but my ex inspired me to write one....i'm open for criticism, but go easy on me, kay?

Dove


To my dearest;
the one I love.
To you, I'm nearest...
My most beautiful dove.

With un-relenting care,
i show you who I am.
A heart as big a bear's,
as sheepish as a lamb.

You're the one that's been there for me...
Making sure i'm well.
waiting on my hand and knee,
But always laughing when i fell!

You've shown me how to be a person...
You've shown me how to function...
I know know that you are the very sun!
But what can be done for my own redemption?

I have too much love to let go.
I don't want you to say "No...";

I always think of you're feelings.
And i always think of you're thoughts.

The memories we share will last forever...
I just want to be with you.
please don't say, "Never!"
All i can do is stay true...

I give you all my loyalty...
I give you all my faith...
i give you all my love...
And i show you no hate...

I love you Veronica Krysta Vega.
You're my one and only love...
my one and only dove.


That's my first poem i've ever written...it makes me sad every time i read it...i dunno...maybe it's good. does anybody like it?




This is a really nice poem crying . Reminds me of my bf. I miss him so much....sorry I posted this late though....
PostPosted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 2:32 pm


haha it's okay. and thank you.

IMTyrannic

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