okay...i'm not good at poems...i'm not a poet, but my ex inspired me to write one....i'm open for criticism, but go easy on me, kay?
Dove
To my dearest;
the one I love.
To you, I'm nearest...
My most beautiful dove.
With un-relenting care,
i show you who I am.
A heart as big a bear's,
as sheepish as a lamb.
You're the one that's been there for me...
Making sure i'm well.
waiting on my hand and knee,
But always laughing when i fell!
You've shown me how to be a person...
You've shown me how to function...
I know know that you are the very sun!
But what can be done for my own redemption?
I have too much love to let go.
I don't want you to say "No...";
I always think of you're feelings.
And i always think of you're thoughts.
The memories we share will last forever...
I just want to be with you.
please don't say, "Never!"
All i can do is stay true...
I give you all my
loyalty...
I give you all my
faith...
i give you all my
love...
And i show you no
hate...
I love you Veronica Krysta Vega.
You're my one and only love...
my one and only dove.
That's my first poem i've ever written...it makes me sad every time i read it...i dunno...maybe it's good. does anybody like it?