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 Posted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 6:07 pm
[ The manuscript is burned and torn beyond legibility ]
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Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 8:53 pm
I really liked it even though it was short. Enjoyed the burnout, and the first entry was good but the second seemed a little lacking compared, well written ^_^
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Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 8:26 pm
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Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 9:42 pm
...Huh?
What's hypnogogia...?
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Posted: Sun Sep 17, 2006 9:53 am
KirbyVictorious ...Huh? What's hypnogogia...? Hypnogogia are the sensations you get when you fall asleep and wake up, sometimes it can be a "waking dream". The context of the story is that this kid has these waking dreams, and his mind spins a fantasy around it that is so intricate that he believes it.
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Posted: Sun Sep 17, 2006 4:59 pm
oh.
I get that a lot O.o
Luckily it goes away...
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Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 9:28 pm
I liked all of these, they were all very intense, and very well written.
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 1:11 am
wow... I liked all of those... they.. here dark and demented.. sad but happen... Very good. Very good...
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Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 4:29 pm
There appears to have been an accident and I may have set this on fire.
Whoops.
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Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 8:01 pm
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Posted: Sun Dec 17, 2006 12:24 pm
NOOOOOOOO! I was gonna read some of them to my sister.... AND they were so good! WHY!?
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Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2006 5:36 pm
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 12:30 pm
=/ I still can't believe it.....
All the great wonders that made me realize that so much could happen in the real world seem to have been burn.
All of the happenings felt as though they couldn't be real, but truth be told, it was all something that can happen. That's what truly amazes me. Zahmen, you were able to create something I never had been able to see before. Reality, and how it's so vast and how there's more to it than what some people see. So much can happen, and that is what I love about your writing.
SO many unexpected things take turns, though I knew something was up your sleeve. So ark and sometimes horrifying, but it makes me wonder, what will happen next? And lures me in even more, trying to uncover the rest of the writings.
I just hope this was for the best. And I hope to see it return again one day...
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